Hi I' am new to this so I hope you guys like it. If I made a few errors I apologize because this is my first time doing this and am not really good at this but if you guys like it.
I will be glad to get your opinion about my fanfiction and that's about it.
btw the characters are not mines, they're cartoon networks except water prince because he's my Original Character (OC) but the rest of the story is mine.
I hope u guys like it and enjoy.
...Later on in Candy Kingdom...
Fionna : " hey Prince Gumball "
Prince Gumball : " hey Fionna "
Prince Gumball : " Fionna am inviting you to a dance ball room party that am throwing for everyone in candy kingdom "
Fionna : " really "
Prince Gumball : " yeah "
Fionna : " well who's going to be there? "
Prince Gumball : " well i invited : Flame Prince, Marshall Lee , Water Prince and i think more people are probably coming "
Fionna : " ok i'll go "
Prince Gumball : " what about you Cake ? "
Cake : " i'll go "
...later at night in the Candy Kingdom Ball Room Palace...
Marshall Lee : " this place is boring "
Prince Gumball : " then leave! "
Flame Prince : " oh come on Marshall lets re-decorate it and make it better "
Marshall Lee : " hey that's not a bad idea "
Prince Gumball : " no way i decorated it my way "
Flame Prince : " well your way sucks "
Marshall Lee : " dude you're right "
Water Prince : " guys come on , can't we just get along,
hey you guys Fionna is here! "
Marshall Lee : " FINALLY! "
Flame Prince : " Fionna what took you soo long "
...Marshall Lee , Flame Prince and Prince Gumballs mouths open...
Cake : " guys close your mouths "
Fionna : " hey guys "( fionna blushing )
Flame Prince : " Fionna you look hot and sexy "
Marshall Lee : " hey i was gonna say that! "
Flame Prince : " well too bad vampire boy! "
Marshall Lee : " why you bastard "
Fionna : " guys don't fight "
Water Prince : " hey Fionna"
Fionna : " hey Water Prince"
Water Prince : " wanna dance with me "
Fionna : " umm.. i guess so "
Marshall Lee : " WHAT?! "
Fionna : " what's wrong Marshall ? "
Marshall Lee : " you're going to dance with water boy?! "
Fionna : " Marshall are you jealous of me dancing with water prince "
Marshall Lee : " maybe "
Flame prince : " maybe you want her all to yourself vampire boy! "
Marshall Lee : " SHUT UP FLAME BOY! "
Fionna : " Marshall stop being mean to Flame Prince "
Marshall Lee : " oh come on , now you're protecting Flame Boy here "
Water Prince : " Fionna leave them be and dance with me instead of them "
Prince Gumball : " no,no,no she's dancing with me "
Marshall Lee : " move aside gumdard am dancing with fionna "
Prince Gumball : " who died and made you king of everything freak boy "
Marshall Lee : " first of all :" i am a vampire", second of all : "so what if am a freak"
and third of all : " i could whoop your little gummy butt! "
Prince Gumball : " hey my butt has nothing to do with this "
Flame Prince : " ha ha ha you 2 look like idiots and i barely think fionna would dance with a miss lady like gum boy
and a monster that only causes destruction "
Marshall Lee : " ha you're the one to talk , you also destroy everything with fire "
Fionna : " guys please don't fight "
Flame Prince : " hey vampire king , what do u call a monster with no girlfriend "
Marshall Lee : " what? "
Flame Prince : " a moron called marshall lee ( he he he ) "
Marshall Lee : " oh oh that's it you're going down flame boy! "
Flame Prince : " wanna take this outside vampire boy "
Marshall Lee : " my pleasure "
Fionna : " guys please no fighting "
...Fionna tries pushing Marshall Lee away from Flame Prince...
Marshall lee : " Fionna let me go he's going down "
Fionna : " Marshall please don't do this i dont wanna see u getting burned down "
Marshall Lee : " Fionna let me go! "
Fionna : " OK "
Flame Prince : " Move u stupid Monster "
Marshall Lee : " What if i dont wanna move "
Flame Prince : " Then i'll make u move out of my way "
...Flame Prince burns Marshall Lee's hands...
...suddenly Marshall Lee pushes Flame Prince into the ground making him burn the whole place down by accident also burning a pole
that falls on both fionna and cake...
Fionna : " what the? "
Cake : " fionna help me "
Fionna : " oh my glob cake are you ok? "
...Fionna helps cake out and instead fionna gets stuck and cant get out from getting hit by a pole...
Water Prince : "Fionna! "
Prince Gumball : " Fionna where are you? "
Fionna : " am over here gumball "
Prince Gumball : "oh ok here let me help u "
Fionna : " umm gumball go and help cake she got injured can u help her i'll try getting out ok "
Prince Gumball : " ok "
...Flame Prince and Marshall Lee turn their head back and they see fionna injured...
Fionna : " darn it i should have asked gumball to help me when i needed it "
Marshall Lee : " FIOOONNNAAA! "
Flame Prince : " Fionna! "
Fionna : " sniff..sniff.. i don't wanna die , MARSHALL HELP ME! "
Marshall Lee : " don't worry fionna am here , hold on ok "
Fionna : " sniff..sniff..ok "
Water Prince : " i'll save you Fionna "
...Water Prince puts all of his water powers on the fire to put it out before it reached where Fionna was...
Water Prince : " there you go! "
Fionna : " oh my glob , thank you Water Prince "
Flame Prince : " Fionna am sorry "
Fionna : " thank you for saving me Water Prince and as for you Flame Prince you're a monster , i told you and marshall to stop fighting
and cause of you i almost died , that's why I NEVER WANNA SEE YOU EVER AGAIN FLAME PRINCE! "
Flame Prince : " i see and i understand fionna don't worry i won't ever get in your way again ,
so this is the first and last time you'll ever see me fionna ( Flame Prince gives Fionna
a kiss on the lips )
also fionna i just wanted to tell u before i go that I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY SNIF..SNIFF.. HEART.. good bie fionna "
Fionna : " oh my glob..umm.. ok bie Flame Prince "
Flame Prince : " Fionna i will always love you ok "
Fionna : " ok "
Marshall Lee : " come on loser leave already cause fionna doesn't wanna see u so bie flamie! "( Marshall Lee Pushes Flame Prince )
Fionna : " Marshall stop that! "
Marshall Lee : " oh come on Fionna " ( Fionna slaps Marshall Lee on his face )
Marshall Lee : " damn it Fionna why the hell did u slap me for?! "
Fionna : " cause you're acting like a jerk! "
...to be continued...