I'm re-posting this, but i've changed the plot-line.
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Chapter 1
Here We Are
The rare shine of a mid-November sun, peaked through the drifting clouds. Down under these clouds was an airport. Within this airport where, oddly enough, three female chipmunks, clinging onto a women's bag.
The first one was Alexis, an albino chipmunk. Her fur was white as snow and her eyes ruby red.
Her forehead fur fluffed up so that one could almost never see the other eye from a profile view.
Her eyes we're sharp and intimidating and looked like they were lined with eye-liner.
The second was a dark brown chipmunk, who went by the name of Piper. She had a slim and delicate face with two stripes reaching from the tip of her small nose, arching over her eye brows and disappearing under her little tuft of forehead fur. Her eyes we're round and her eyelashes full, stripes starting from the edges of her eyes pointed towards her nose, the colour was dark sapphire.
The last chipmunk was a petite and rather fragile looking chipmunk. Her fur was smooth and milky brown. Her hair slanted towards the right and had two stripes that went behind her head. Her eyes looked rather Asian and where emerald in colour. Her face was rather round and sweet looking. Her name was May.
"We've finally arrived." Said Piper in a sophisticated and cheerful manner.
"Los Angeles, baby!" Said Alexis said in excitement
May remained silent.
Soon the three chipmunks jumped down from the women's bag, where they walked out of the airport, and stole a cab ride with another person who was going in the same direction as them.
Clinging onto the cab passenger, they jumped out of the cab once he stepped out.
"Hmm...we should be able to find him here." Piper said as they looked up at a tall building
"so...we'll find that Hawk dude from here?" Alexis asked.
"best thing we can do is hope so." Piper said.