The story of sasuke and naruko chapter 1

This takes place after sasuke left the leaf village how naruto made a promise to sakura and his sister naruko to bring back sasuke he fought sasuke and lost now to naruto.

Naruto sat in the hospital bed remembering the fight when naruko walked in and asked "did you bring back sasuke-kun like you promised bro?" Naruto looked at his sister in disappointment "no sorry sis but I still intend to keep my promise to both you and sakura-chan" he said. Naruko then ran out of the hospital crying she cried all the way back to naruto's and her apartment and went into her room.

Naruto is in the hospital in his room he gets a visit from sakura and an hour later his best friend james shigashashimi. "Hey bro how you doing?" james asked his friend "I am fine but you should go talk to naruko she is not happy at all" naruto replied. James went to talk naruko but he couldn't really hear anything except for crying.

James didn't like his friends to be upset so he went to get advice on how to cheer up girls from ino. "Hey ino can I ask you a question?" he asked and ino replied "sure you can james!" "how can I cheer up a girl like naruko?" he asked "oh you like her don't you?" she asked "NO! I just don't like my friends to be upset that's why I am asking!" he exclaimed. "Then why are you blushing?" Ino asked "you embarrassed me that's why" James said "ok take her out for ramen, or wait why is she upset?" ino asked. "She is upset because the fact naruto came back without sasuke that's why" said james "oh! Then just give her some time she cheer up eventually" said ino.

Ok this is the end of the 1st chapter commet and tell me what you think about it.