Hey guys, me here. Tell me what you think, flames and tips accepted, thanks.
My POV
You may know of my cousin, Max, who doesn't? Unfortunately none of he flock thought I could possibly be alive, the tests they put me through was worse than the tests of the rest of the flock. If I could survive then my better, younger, stronger, and faster cousin could, right?
Sorry for sounding so bitter, but I have reason to be, I was the only one who spent hours on a rack tested for stretchiness, with hot coals burrowing into my wings or deep frozen to test temperature adjustment, and more, yet I wasn't taken with them. Was I not good enough.
At least they couldn't take my voice if they wanted my tests to be successful and one whitecoat was sneaking me music so I wouldn't tell his boss he had tried to kill me, why would she believe me, I had the scar to prove it.
Suddenly cries of we have the flock were heard and I sang all the louder, hoping someone would hear, hoping Fang would hear
(She Wolf, David Guetta, Feat Sia)
A shot in the dark
A past lost in space
And where do I start?
The past and the chase
You hunted me down
Like a wolf, a predator
I felt like a deer in your lights
You loved me and I froze in time
Hungry for that flesh of mine
But I can't compete with the she-wolf, who has brought me to my knees
What do you see in those yellow eyes?
'Cause I'm falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
Falling to pieces
Did she lie in wait?
Was I bait to pull you in?
The thrill of the kill
You feel is a sin
I lay with the wolves
Alone, it seems,
I thought I was part of you
You loved me and I froze in time
Hungry for that flesh of mine
But I can't compete with the she-wolf, who has brought me to my knees
What do you see in those yellow eyes?
'Cause I'm falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
Falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
Falling to pieces
I'm falling to pieces
Falling to pieces
I held my breath, waiting for a reply.
Fang POV
My heart stopped, memories flooded my mind. A voice singing, me crooning back, without thinking my mouth opened letting out the song I sang to those beautiful blue eyes
(She Will Be Loved, Maroon 5)
Beauty queen of only eighteen
She had some trouble with herself
He was always there to help her
She always belonged to someone else
I drove for miles and miles
And wound up at your door
I've had you so many times but somehow
I want more
I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
She will be loved
Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful
I know I tend to get so insecure
It doesn't matter anymore
It's not always rainbows and butterflies
It's compromise that moves us along, yeah
My heart is full and my door's always open
You can come anytime you want
I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
I know where you hide
Alone in your car
Know all of the things that make you who you are
I know that goodbye means nothing at all
Comes back and begs me to catch her every time she falls
Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful
I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
[Iggy sang along]
Please don't try so hard to say goodbye
Please don't try so hard to say goodbye
Yeah
[softly]
I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Try so hard to say goodbye
Max POV
It couldn't be my cousin, could it?
Hoped you liked, and if you didn't and think I should never write again ill keep writing, but give me tips