The Son of Chaos and Order: Commander Infinity
Disclaimer: I am a teenager. If I am Rick Riordan, I'll be using my money to buy things that is useless but still cool.
Prologue: Betrayal
After the giant war, Camp Demigod
Percy's POV
I was going to propose to Annabeth the same time Jason is proposing to Piper. Leo and Frank cheered us on. Arthur Hunter even told me and Jason have the approval from Athena and Aphrodite. Arthur, that guy helped me in 2 wars. Without him, I'd be dust. He is blessed by the Olympians, Titans and Primordial Deities except for Lady Chaos and Lord Order. He must be real special. He has many titles including Bane of Porphyrion and Kronos. He took 10 of the giants without the help of a god. His sword, Mortal, is rumored to be a fusion of Imperial Gold, Celestial Bronze, Stygian Iron and Olympian Obsidian. But his sword made beings fade from existence. I pushed that thought out of my head as I headed for the beach.
Jason's POV
I can't wait to propose to Piper. Even though our first relationship before the war was a trick of the Mist, we managed to remain a couple. During the war, our relationship strengthened and we became closer. I waved at Percy so he came closer. "I can see them" I said, excited. "Let's go" he replied. We walked towards the two girls when we saw them making out with 2 guys. Annabeth was making out with David Smith while Piper was making out with Ryan Kane. Ryan was my power hungry, arrogant, half-brother. David was Percy's half-brother. Both were 17 like us. They were both proclaimed the favorite children of my father and Poseidon. My heart felt like it was stabbed and stepped on with boots. Percy looked like he was going to explode. "Annabeth?" he asked. "Oh my gods, Percy. I meant to tell you tonight." She said ashamed. "Well, you too, Pipes?" I yelled. "Jason, I can explain." Said Piper. "I can too, Percy" added Annabeth. "Save it. We loved you completely. You both just wanted the attention." I and Percy said in unison. "They left for better and improved version so stop being clingy" said David. "How many monsters have you killed?" I asked innocently. "50 like Ryan" snarled David. "I killed half of Kronos' Army. Defeated Atlas, Hyperion and Kronos. I slew Polybotes and helped destroy Alyconeus. I restored the Legion Standard for the Twelfth Legion Fulminata." Said Percy angrily. "I slew the Trojan Sea Monster, Encladeus, Krios, Otus and Ephliates. I toppled the black throne of Kronos. I am the Praetor of the Twelfth Legion." I said. "YEAH SURE!" yelled Ryan.
Percy's POV
I got the wedding ring box and motioned at Jason. We both threw it at the girls' feet. We turned around and left. "Hope you love your new boyfriends. Good Bye, Annabeth Chase and Piper McLean. Ave Atque Vale." I said. Me and Jason ran to our cabins and packed up our belongings. Tears were streaming down my face. I didn't bother stop them. I bolted from my cabin and met with Jason. We both were about to cross the boundaries when we saw a shadow flicker and it formed into a humanoid shape. Nico di Angelo joined us. Thalia also came from behind us. "We are so sorry, Perce and Jace." Said Nico sadly with Thalia. Reyna joined us with Hylla. "We are coming with you. So is Octavian. He repented and wanted to make it up to you." Explained Hylla as Octavian approached us. We set out to the mortal world.
3rd Person POV
Annabeth and Piper opened their respective boxes. Inside were rings. Annabeth's ring was a golden ring with an emerald on top. It was engraved: To my one and only Wise Girl, I hope to spend my days with the only person I want. Annabeth cried. Piper's ring was silver with a sapphire attached. Engraved was: To my wonderful and special Pipes, I wish that we stay together forever. Her tears were streaming and flowing like there was no tomorrow. Arthur disappeared from the two and went to Chaos and Order, his parents.
1 WEEK LATER, IN THE WILDERNESS
Jason's POV
We had no more resources. We were dying of thirst, exhaustion and hunger. I stumbled upon a man. He had a hood on and he had a huge picnic set out for him. "The famous Perseus Jackson, Nicolas di Angelo and Jason Grace. An honor to meet you" said the man. "How do you know our names?" I asked politely. "Forgot a friend so soon, Jacey?" said the man as he removed his hood. Dark haired, gold and silver eyes, Jason was surprised. The unclaimed demigod was the man in the hood. Also known as Arthur Hunter. "Arthur? How'd you know that we left camp?" asked Nico. "Death Breath, your scent is really strong. With Percy and Jace, it is even more so you'll attract monsters at every corner." Explained Arthur. "I'm offering you a chance to join my parents' army." He continued. "What is the catch?" asked Percy. "Immortality, Heightened Senses, Enhanced Powers, and a chance to see your dead friends." Replied Arthur. We looked at each other and we knew the game plan. "Oh what the Hades, let's go!" Percy said excitedly.
I smirked at Percy's willingness. Arthur created a portal and motioned us to it. Good bye forever, Piper McLean. I loved you with my whole heart and soul but you just used me to gain attention. Go to Tartarus you backstabbing bitch. I thought as I entered the portal.
Arthur's POV
The recruiting of the most powerful demigods of the century and their friends wasn't as bad as I hoped. Even I wouldn't deny if I was in their shoes. Being betrayed by your soul mate was like a stab to the chest. But being betrayed by your soul mate with your half-brother is just pouring alcohol and lemonade to a wound. (A/N: Trust me that is really painful. I can't fault myself for being curious right?) Anyways, I was claimed by my parents via dream. Turns out I am ½ primordial (A/N: This is going to get confusing), ¼ something, another ¼ something equals my ½ human part. That is messed. So I am a demi-primordial right? No. My dad dropped another mind blowing statement. My mother, Sarah Nighthunter (yes, I thought her maiden name was Hunter too), was my birth mother but Lady Chaos put her fertile stuff (A/N: Don't want to go that descriptive) in my mother's womb so that she has a technical true born son. So my status in the Greco-Roman pantheon is a tri-blood. I have ¾ of godly ichor in my veins, I think. So my parents gave me my required knowledge of my powers but they still haven't explained why I had these weird black tattoos.
I stepped out of the portal into the First Planet, Inanis or in English, The Void. "Welcome to the Void. The first planet in existence. This is the dead center of it. Ordinis et Chaos et domus in English, The Palace of Order and Chaos, the home of my parents. The immortal stomping grounds of the creators of the universe. Of course, the rooms of the Assassins of the Void, The Army of Order's commanders and the Legion of Chaos' commanders." I explained as their jaws went down to the depths of Tartarus. "Where will we be staying?" asked Reyna. "You will be staying at the Palace until your rank is determined tomorrow." I replied. "What is the highest position that is attainable?" questioned Thalia. "The highest position attainable is being part of the Assassins of the Void. Basically a black ops division." I replied with a smirk. "What is your rank?" asked Percy. "I am ranked Commander of the two divisions and the Leader of the Assassins." I said with pride. Their eyes bugged out yet again.
Unknown POV
"Is the two heroes, Jackson and Grace, eliminated?" I asked. "Yes, my lord. Also, the di Angelo, the other Grace, the two daughters of Bellona and the legacy of Apollo" said Kronos with a hint of fear in his voice. "Gaea, your plan was foolproof. Faking falling asleep." I praised. "Thank you, my lord." She said and bowed. They both left the throne room. "Angelicus, you should be resting." Said my brother. "Daemon, Chaos and Order won't know what will happen as they watch their very universe burn with the fires of the Seraph and Demon Kind." I replied while growling. Order and Chaos let this be a lesson to you. Never let your siblings be forgotten. While you were worshipped, me and Daemon were forgotten and nearly faded. We will unleash the wrath of Hell and Heaven upon you.
A/N: This is my first attempt at writing a fan fiction. Please no flames and harsh reviews. I would really enjoy it if you reviewed and gave me a few pointers. I'd update faster if you followed and favorite. PM me if you have suggestion for an OC, a plot twist and all that good stuff. This story will be updated bi-monthly or weekly depending on my homework
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Here is my recommendations for fan fictions:
All of Anaklusmos14's stories (one of the best writers I've seen in )
All of TheseusLives' stories
Falling for a Goddess by Aix98 (Pertemis)
Eternal Love by Aix98 (Sequel to Falling for a Goddess)
Everlasting Promises by Starblade176
True Son of Chaos by nutsofthechest
Until Next time my fellow readers
Percival Nighthunter.
