Author's Note:
Hey everyone! This is Greeni5. ;-) This is actually my very first fanfic ever written, so please be respectful. I love and appreciate critiques and suggestions such as how to improve my writing. :] Well, anyways, please enjoy my first story-base on Percy Jackson and the Olympians- "The commander of Chaos"!
DISCLAIMER: I don't own the Percy Jackson series Dx I wish I do…
Percy's POV
They have abandoned me. They; my friends, treated me like I never existed. It was like I was thrown aside and ignored. This all happened last week, when Jake came into my perfect life.
~Flashback~
I was heading to the pavilion when the couch shell blew. I quickly ran toward the Big House, where I saw a huge crowd of people gathering around. Everybody was whispering among themselves, mumbling around an unconscious demigod in front of the entrance.
In the crowd, I saw my friends; Thalia, Nico, Annabeth and Grover. They seemed just as confused as I am. I made my way through the crowd and towards them "What happened?" I asked them. Thalia gave me a confused look "I don't know. I only heard that there was an unconscious demigod at the front gate-" Grover interrupted "He was bleeding really badly. They were horrible scars and bruises on him. I even heard some people saying that he might not even be alive!" I nodded. Whoever this guy is, they sure are making a big fuss over him. I wonder if he is someone special. Then I cleared my throat and everyone looked at me "Ahem. I would really appreciate it if you could make way." They all realized that they were blocking the entrance to the Big House. The crowd dispersed and everyone walked away; talking about the unconscious demigod.
I walked in the Big House with my friends. Chiron noticed us and trotted toward us "Hello Percy, Thalia, Nico, Grover and Annabeth." I smiled at him. Chiron is always calm and self-controlled. He is the perfect model for Camp Half-Blood when it is in chaos. "Chiron, is the rumor about the demigod true?" I asked curiously. Chiron's face saddened and he nodded "Unfortunately, it is. The boy is very injured. The Apollo campers are taking care of him" "Can we visit him?" Annabeth asked. Chiron nodded "Of course my child. Just be quiet and don't spread anymore rumors. The boy is in the nursery; still recovering." I waved goodbye to Chiron and me and my friends headed toward the Nursery.
When we got there to the Nursery, the Apollo campers all looked at us. Then they asked "Why are you guys here?" I answered "Chiron said we could visit the demigod." They nodded in understanding and parted way for us. When I reached him, I was horrified. There was cuts that dugged deep into the boy's flesh; almost visible enough to reveal the bone. Huge black and purple bruises were on the boy's legs and shoulder. The demigod had black dirty hair and a pale white skin. He slowly opened his eyes when he heard us talking and I gasped at the sight of pure black eyes; the eyes as dark as lead.
OOOooh! Who could the demigod be a son of? ;) review and wait for the next update! 3 Lemme know what u think so far :D
-Greeni5
