Chapter 1: Captured
Ash, Brock, and Dawn were walking down a dusty road. They were thinking about challenges ahead of them. Ash had his last Gym Badge in mind, and Dawn was thinking about contest moves. No one was thinking about what happened next, though. Not everyone thinks about (blocked due to spoilers).
Suddenly, five small creatures on strange, flying stars flew towards them! "Whoa! What are those!" Ash cried. The stars crashed in front of them and the creatures landed on their feet. The gang now had a better look. They were all spherical, had stubby arms, and were no higher than a foot. One was red with a crown of fire on its head. Another was green and a similar crown, but of electricity. The third was blue with a crown of ice crystals. The fourth and fifth creatures were both pink, one having a baseball cap with a curved blade on it, and the last with a floppy green hat, carrying a sharp sword.
Dawn got out her Pokedex and scanned the one with the baseball cap. In response, the machine said "Jigglypuff, the-". At that, she closed it and said, "Guys, I don't think these are Jigglypuffs."
That was obviously true. Jigglypuffs didn't carry swords, or have crowns of fire, electricity, or ice. In fact, they were not Pokemon at all. If Ash and his friends had lived on another planet, they would have recognized the creatures as Kirbys.
"They don't look friendly." Brock remarked. As a response, the Sword Kirby scowled and swung his weapon in air while the baseball-capped Cutter Kirby took the blade off of his hat.
"Go, Staraptor!" Ash said as he threw out his Poke ball. The others did likewise, and their defense now included Pikachu, Staraptor, Piplup, Buneary, Croagunk, and Sudowoodo.
Dawn ordered Buneary and Piplup to attack the Sword Kirby (Yeah, of course she didn't say that exactly). It raised its sword to block an Ice Beam and a Bubblebeam. Then, the two Pokemon were hit with a blast of lightning from the Spark Kirby and a sharp beam of energy from the Sword Kirby, knocking them out.
The Cutter Kirby raised his blade and threw it like a boomerang, hitting Pikachu and Sudowoodo, making them faint. An onslaught of ice breath took out Staraptor, and Croagunk was blasted and defeated with a burst of fire.
Before anymore Pokemon were set out, the Kirbys took out a big net. Once Ash and his friends were in the net, they put the net on one of the stars, hopped on the other stars, and headed for a giant, star-shaped ship.
Commentary (Kommentary? Nah.): This is my first fanfic. This will be mostly Kirby-based and yeah, that's about all I have to say. Please read and review, and don't flame, please.