Hey! I'm so excited to start my first story! I'll get right to it. No offense if I sound racist, I try not to and I am definitely not against any race or religion.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything, except for my characters (If I make any to stand in), and the plot line (sort of).
Inro to Change is good.
Hey. What's up? I'm Maximum Ride. Call me Max. Maybe you've heard of me? No, oh well that's fine. And if you have that's awesome.
I am 17.I have blonde sun streaked hair with some natural brown highlights. My eyes are supposedly beautifully brown like melted chocolate. Or so Ella says. I get very white in winter, but it is the beginning of summer so I am getting tanner. Oh, and I'm really tall.
Ella is my half-sister. She too is 17.I don't feel like explaining it but basically right after my mom had me she had Ella. She has long dark hair, and brown eyes. She also has a Hispanic complexion, and is truly beautiful.
My Mom is Doctor Valencia Martinez. She looks like an older version of Ella and she is 47.
I take after my Dad who was my mom's first husband. It didn't work to well so they separated, not technically divorced and so I have to go see every now and then.
My parents get along well and are friends with his new wife Martina. Jeb, my dad, has a son who is my half brother. He is 15, his name is Ari, he has brown hair and brown eyes and he was pretty adorable as a little kid.
Ella and I got along pretty well. Except she has a different fashion sense then I do. I like a more skater look, while Ella likes a preppy look.
She likes to wear dresses and skirts, and cute light little tops. But she is definitely not a tight shirt, low skirt girl. She likes to do hair and make-up and wear heels.
I, on the other hand, prefer skinny jeans, graphic/band tee shirts, tennis shoes, and a little make-up. For make-up I use mascara and white sparkle eye-shadow. Why I don't know. For party's I like to do those cat eyes things with eye-liner. Most of the time my hair is done in simple fashions.
Out of my group of friend's there are Iggy and Gazzy the twins, there sister Angel who is about nine months younger like Ella and myself. Then there is Fang and Nudge.
Iggy and Gazzy had blonde hair and blue eyes. Iggy's hair had a strawberry tint to it.
Angel has blonde hair, blue eyes, is sort of tall, and is very sweet to us.
Fang has olive skin and black hair that hangs sexily in his eyes. He has the deepest eyes I have ever seen and they are obsidian. He's really tall and muscular. Very hot I must say. I've had a crush on him since I started liking boys in the fourth grade. He has an amazing smile when he actually smiles for us.
Nudge has mocha skin, long brown hair that curls into beautiful ringlets, and brown eyes. She is a fashionista chatterbox. Right after Fang's mom had Fang she had an affair with a colored man.
We are all strong, sarcastic, tall, seventeen year old, water-loving, freaks. And I am the leader of them. We all loved the outdoors, us girls like to roller-skate and the boys like to skateboard. We often went on camping trips and such. My mom has a boat on the Potomac; it's pretty big so we like to go up there. I don't have my captains license, but I will when I'm old enough.
Oh, I forgot to mention that we live in Spotsylvania, Virginia. We go to Riverbend Highschool.
Just the intro. Next chapter tomorrow. Tell me if you like the character changes and/ or questions/complaints.
Thanks,
Ace :)
