A/N: Hey guys! I know no one's really heard from me in a while and this fic is kind of silly, but just go with it!
For those of you that don't know, this fanfiction is a re-write of a very famous fic called "My Immortal", one of the most terrible, awful, amazing, great, hilarious and poorly-written pieces of literature on the planet.
This fic, which you are about to read, is my attempts to make "My Immortal" more comprehensible, approachable and realistic. Some of the characters, details and descriptions have been changed, but each chapter was written side-by-side with the original to retain its original plot and structure.
I suggest reading each chapter side-by-side, reading the original "My Immortal" chapter (which can be found right here on ), then the rewrite by me.
I hope you enjoy!
Ebony Raven Way was a strange girl, and always stood out around Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, even among her fellow Slytherins.
It wasn't her long, black hair that danced to the small of her back, streaked with violet and crimson or her ice-blue eyes that made her seem so different. There was just something... odd about the girl.
Awaking from the velvety retreat of the luxurious four-poster bed in the girls' dormitory, she slipped on a black strapless top which laced up like a corset, a tiny leather miniskirt and a kinky stretch of neon pink fishnet stockings, taking one last check in the mirror to make sure her violently black, white and red makeup was in place.
Outside, in the courtyards, slivers of silver sleet rained down, their dark clouds shutting out all hope of sunshine. Ebony smiled. She hated the sun.
"Ebony!" a voice shouted behind her.
She turned around to see none other than Draco Malfoy sauntering towards her, a smirk permanently etched into his features.
"What's up, Draco?" she asked shyly, peering up through her bangs.
"Nothing," he replied coyly.
"EBONY, OVER HERE!"
"Coming!" she shouted over her shoulder. "Sorry," she told Malfoy, "But I have to go."