This is my first fanfiction so please review and tell me what I can do to improve! Thanks!
Chapter 1
Annabeth's POV
Annabeth was sitting on her bunk reading earn she heard a knock on the door. "Come in!"
It was Percy in his usual CHB tee-shirt and jeans. "Hey Annabeth, want to go for a walk? I have a surprise for you!"
"Sure!" she had nothing to do anyways. Plus she always loved to go on walks with Percy. She walked with him out the door.
"So where to?" she asked.
"I can't tell you that, remember? It's a surprise Wise Girl."
"I hate surprises," she whined. She hated not knowing what to expect.
"Well you'll like this one!" Percy replied. He gave her a kiss on the head. "I packed us some lunch and supper so we can stay all day if you want. Also it'll be just us together, which I thought you would enjoy."
"Well then lets get going!" Annabeth was excited. Whole day just with Percy! She was bursting with joy!
They began their walk through the woods. They just talked about the normal stuff like what new campers came, what their friends were doing, etc.
They were walking for about thirty minutes until Annabeth started to worry wether Percy knew where he was going or not. She decided to ask. "Are you sure you know where you're going Seaweed Brain?"
Percy seemed confident though. "There is no need to worry," he assured her. "We'll arrive in a little while. Don't worry, I just want you to be happy."
Annabeth took his advise. They continued their journey hand in hand. It gave her comfort to know there was someone who cared about her.
A little more walking and the trees began to clear to a beautiful meadow with flowers everywhere and a brook running through the middle.
She couldn't believe her eyes! It was beautiful!
She turned to Percy and said, "Thank you."
He looked back at her with his sea green eyes and replied, "No need to thank me. I have you, and thats all the thanks I need."
He had always been the sweetest thing. She loved him so much. "I love you."
"I love you to Wise Girl. Now lets eat, i'm starving!"