Me:Ok people I'm redoing this because the last time wasn't so great and I apoloize about the last time I wrote this story. Also THIS IS the real first chapter!
Lion:Angie doesn't own Antauri, but herself
Me:Here is my story
In a world called Earth a girl in a gray jacket with a orange T-shirt underneath the jacket with dark blue jeans and Reeboks. Her hair was brown passed about 5 inches below the shoulder and her eyes was a dark brown. The girl's name was Angie. Angie was at her school doing her classwork in Per.7 which is Geography, anyway the bell ring and she goes to the bus, go home,do her boring homework, and finally go on the computer. She was reading on when out of nowhere she heard a strange sound and look behind her.She was looking at a yellowish portal in her DOORWAY!
"Wow, a portal!"Angie said as she went to the near the portal, but she didn't know there was someone in her closet and went behind her.
"This is weird and it might get weirder if someone puAHHHHHHH!"Angie screamed as she was pushed in the yellowish portal to a place that she don't know.
In the Super Robot
The Silver Antauri was metiaing peacefully until his blue eyes shot open. He had sense a great power coming.
Me:Yes I know I miss spelled a word so please don't say about anything about that and I know the beginning is not that great, but story is getting a little more good. Right?
Flame:R n R people!