So let me start by saying that this story will definitely be SasuSaku, NaruHina, ect. Just give me time to develop each character. I really want this story to be as good as I can manage. It's my first fanfic ever. So any comments on it would be appreciated it :)
Not sure who might read this but I sure as hell will be proud of this and I will follow through the very end with this story. Here's this little note to those who read a little into my personal life masked by one of my favorite manga/anime characters. I'm honored by those who read it. And by personal life I mean my writing guys :)
I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS IN IT. The only thing I own is the idea of this story I've been typing up since 11:30 PM on 05.03.15
Expect there to be lemons as the story develops. So Please beware and know this is mature writing. Be patient please, my writing is very important to me and I take pride in the details I try to put in.
By the way, comments are welcomed and criticisms as well. lol. There isn't anyone who can criticize my writing like I do. Trust me, I'll read this over and find little flaws and hate myself for it. haha.
Ok guys, here's a proofread version of the first chapter. I'm going to fix the other chapters because I get so caught up in my writing that I forget about paragraphs. I've literally been like this since high school. Not even my teachers found a way to cut my habit. LOL. So I'm sorry if it was a little frustrating trying to read it all bunched up together. I only did minor tweaks to this chapter.
First Day Of High School
As anxious as I was, I could not sleep the night before my nightmare would start. Seriously, How hard can high school be? It can't be a scene straight out of Mean Girls now can it? So instead of going to sleep, I think about all the new shoes I've got and about how pretty I'll look with my long curly bubble gum pink hair along with my high school uniform. I smile and soon start to giggle at the thought. And to make my perfect image of high school, I think about all the new school supplies I've bought and that's how my night went. Engulfed in my naivative and idealism of how perfect high school would be. I'm not sure when or how, but I managed a couple of hours of sleep. Too soon I wake up by the sound of my Ipod touch going off, telling me it's time to wake up and get ready for my first day of high school. Now I'll admit, I was so happy I forgot how much of a morning person I'm not and quickly got up and made my way to the shower at 5:30 AM. I get ready and put on a pair of mid-thigh black socks along with my mini skirt and then i remember to put on a pair of black legging type shorts for anyone trying to look up my skirt. Then I head to put on my plain white button up polo along with my small black and sky blue bow tie to match the pattern on my skirt. I blow dry my hair and go on to add makeup to my face. A little foundation with some mascara and a little color to my lips goes a long way, or so I think. And before anything else, I grab a hold of my black blazer that goes with my uniform with the school's most precious symbol embedded on the right side of it, Konoha's Leaf symbol. Just as I take one last good look at myself in the mirror I giggle and grab my black Dr. Martens Maelly boots. And just like that, I head on out to my first day of school.
I walk to school and soon realize how early I am. Not many student's walk the halls except the really weird kids who get to school super early to discuss how awesome their summer was spent playing video games and readings books. To which I found kind of bizarre really. I walk to student services and walk towards a lady who sits at a pretty intimidating big desk with tons of papers stacked neatly everywhere. I'm hesitant to ask because I don't want to be such a freshman that she'll think I'm a bother, but hey.. there goes what little cover up I had planned for myself. I walk up to her desk a little more nervous than I wished I had. And with little confidence I speak for the first time today. "Hi, I'm new here and I wanted to see where I can get my schedule for my classes?" she stares at me with a blank expression. Talk about intimidating the new kids, seriously. She blinks a couple of times before she speaks. "Are you a freshman?" bingo! and there I go answering her as confident as I can manage, "yes ma'm…"I say this while standing as tall as I can manage. "well you can go to the front office and give them your name, they will print out a copy of your schedule and can give you a rundown on where your classes can be found." I blink a couple of times before trying to register everything she just spoke. How mad I was that I had walked from home to school and I had come early only to walk into the place where I thought I could get help. What a useless woman she turned out to be… "what was her name again?" I try to remember while I make my way to the front office to get my schedule. I finally make it there without remembering her name and I settle for what seems more normal to me as I speak.
"Hi, I was looking for my schedule. I was told by student services to drop by the main office to pick it up." It came out shyly and almost like I had practice what I was going to tell them just minutes before walking in here… but truly I was just such a nervous wreck. Fortunately, the ladies here were more welcoming. They smiled at me like they knew I was some kind of lost puppy looking for comfort. And truly I was. My day was starting to feel too long. For whatever reason I only pick up the name of one of the ladies who sits behind the giant and long desk that covers up whatever they are working on. Her name was Shizune and maybe it was because her smile was the most sincere that I actually remembered her. She quickly spoke with a professional tone and said, "What's your name sweetheart?" and I quickly feel safe around her just like that, before I answer "Haruno, Sakura." She smiles at me before turning her attention to her computer and typing my name, I assume. Soon I hear something printing and I hope it's my schedule as I'm beginning to feel self conscious around these women who look at me like I'm an alien with five eyes and two heads. And just on cue, Miss Shizune gets up and goes around a corner that is hidden to my view. A minute later, she comes out with another sincere smile on her face and hands me my schedule. "Good luck sweetheart, If you need help getting around just ask the teachers in the halls. They stand outside their doors for the first week of school for people who are new and in case they need help getting around." I inhale deeply…"Thank you" I say and manage to half smile before walking away. As soon as I'm out of the main office I let out a deep breath I didn't know I was holding in. And just like that I question my ability of being able to keep my facade on for the rest of the day. And that is how I started my first day of high school at, Konoha's Leaf High Academy.