The first part of my story, hope you guys like it :)
Downtown Chicago
Finally. The sentence was over. He was done with prison. It wasn't his fault that he had gotten there in the first place, but now he would finally be able to take care of the guy who had caused him all those years of suffering...
Downtown Chicago. One of the busiest places on Earth. And one of his most favorite places. He walked into a coffee shop, got an espresso to celebrate his release.
He didn't eat. He could only have pills. The coffee probably wasn't that good for him either. He usually had to have decaf but today was a special day...
They had a lot of trouble feeding him in jail. It didn't matter to him. He had revenge to attend to. His revenge fueled him.
As he was about to walk out, a little girl approached him. She seemed awfully short, even for a child. She was wearing a hood, which seemed odd, as it was very hot outside.
"Follow me." she said, looking him in the eye, her voice almost melodious. Mesmerizing.
"What? Who are you? Don't you know who I am?" The man was confused. Her voice seemed to be convincing him to do so.
This seemed a little humourous to the little girl, she only repeated the words "Follow me."
Another girl walked by. She looked exactly the same as the first. The man did not know what to do. Somehow, they looked exactly the same. But they were different in height. He began to sweat. "I really need my bodyguard," he thought. "Who the hell are you?"
"My name does not matter to you Mr. Spiro, just follow me and you shall be rewarded greatly..." they both intoned... Spiro cracked. He got up and walked out with them. There was something very wrong going on.
"Congratulations. We are your new business partners. And oh do we have much in store for you and this world..."
The two girls showed him the way.
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