Hi this is my second story well my first went horribly so I'm trying to make another story please review!!!! And if you don't like script form don't read this I'm bad at grammar so I write script form.
L: Lily
J: James
A: Alice
F: Frank
S: Sirius
R: Remus
P: Peter
S: Snape
L: Lucios
R: FOR GODS SAKE PADFOOT WAKEUP!!!
S: oh go shove a sock down your thought moony.
J: holy crap padfoot just wakeup I'm starving hmmmmmmmm I wonder… oh my god padfoot there are hot girls in our dormitory!
S: (fall out of bed and sees there are no girls only James with his mischievous grin on his face) screw you James.
J: c'mon padfoot I'm starvingggggg!
S: fine I'm coming.
R: finally wait……..where is peter?
S: I don't know.
J: he's probably stuffing his face like I wish I was now, hurry up!
Down In the Cafeteria
L: Alice what's wrong you look upset.
A: Frank dumped me.
L: WHAT!
A: he want to see other peo…(breaks down crying)
L: oh Alice it's okay.
(Frank comes notices Alice crying, frank looks confused Lily gives him a glarehe goes and sits some were else.)
L: you should go get some sleep all cover for your classes.
A: thanks.. Sniff Lily. (Runs out the doors)
(James sits down beside Lily)
L: James please go away and leave me alone.
J: but if I did that how could you tell me about your undying love for me.
L: if by undying love you mean undying sickness the yes I have undying love for you.
J: YOU JUST ADMITED THAT YOU HAVE YOU HAVE UNDYING LOVE FOR ME HEY SIRIUS GUESS WHAT LILY JUST ADMITED THAT SHE HAS UNDYING LOVE FOR ME. (yells from where he and lily are.)
S: CONGRATS PRONGS. (yells from where he is sitting)
L: wait no I didn't mean it like that.
J: yes you did Lily don't lie.
L: the only one lying is you now if you don't mind I'm heading to potions.
So what do you think good bad? Please review!!