a tanka i wrote for lit class. it's kind of like bloody sakura except it's a shorter version.
The Beauty I see
Within those cherry blossoms
Blood stained and tainted
Beaten and stabbed at my own heart
This is where I ought to stay
it's really hard to write 5 7 5 7 7 syllables, in my opinion. it's a bit over 31 syllables. it's totally fine. it makes sense.
reviews- i'm going to let you decide.