b :Rest In Pieces:
Okay, this is the second story I've made on Fanfiction. The first one... well, let's just not get into that ;; Okay, so no excessive flames, only constructive critisism, okay? Tell me what you think of my story and tell me if the Prologue is captivating enough for me to post the first chapter (I've already written it). I'll only write more if I get any reviews! Thanks in advance!
BORING DISCLAIMER: I don't own Pokémon, only the ones that I created. I also am not Game Freak, Pokémon, etc. I only own the Pokémon that I made and the characters and towns and stuff. I think you get the picture. /b
PROLOGUE
Foaming water crashed all around her, glittering brokenly. The pale full moon was reflected identically in the center of the lake, where the water was unmoving and silent. Fireflies scattered in the midnight air; it was as if someone kept poking a minuscule hole in the sky and then sewing it up, only to have it pinpricked again. The wind was almost visible; it swirled the water, it swayed the lavender flowers, and it rippled her skirt.
The girl pushed her skirt aside, as not for the water to grab it and pull it under. She was atop a large stone jutting from the water, which broke the waves and allowed a small area of calm water beside it. A long golden strand of her hair whipped around her as it was freed from her hands. She stared ahead into the moon's reflection, patience running thin.
It was time. The being rose from the water, tall and slim. It was elegant, and the girl imagined beauty and femininity rising from the skin of this creature. Water was immediately shed, slipping off like wax. Dryness was restored to the creature, making it even more gorgeous.
The girl waited for the entity to glide to her, and finally it did. The crashing of the waves grew louder, almost ominously. Words were exchanged between human and spirit, the conversation becoming more intense as the moments edged on.
Suddenly, her eyes grew wide with terror. The being opened its arms wide, and a glowing green energy crackled between them, almost like electricity. It threw its head back, and the green energy grew as it migrated closer to the being's heart. The energy continued to grow until it was of gigantic size, big enough to fit the girl inside.
"With this energy, I give you everything I've dreamed of... Never again shall you suffer, as now you will understand the greats of death that I have never learned."
Forcefully the entity bowled the orb of energy to the girl, whose eyes grew even bigger and glistened from tears. She was engulfed and tried to scream but couldn't; the pain was too intense, she was too weak. At last the light faded away, as did the girl's soul.
The girl opened her mouth to speak her final words. "Please... just let me rest in pieces."