HEY GUYS! HOW ARE YOU TODAY? I am really great, because I actually finished this! I am still working on Maximumly Hard Knock Life (my other story, check it out if you haven't read it yet) and I have a lot of surprises in store for that. But this is maybe my new story. Should I continue it as a

ONE: SHORT STORY

TWO: LONG STORY

THREE: ONE SHOT

It is all up to my amazing, favorite readers! You are in charge of what I should do. I have trust in you. Just make sure that I put my trust in the right people. Bye!

Narrativepov:

Maximum Ride was sitting in her bedroom. She was only ten years old, just escaped from the evil School three months ago, and was completely bored. It's funny how little there was to do when you are an avian human hybrid.

But, actually, there was something bothering Max. Something that no amount of sarcasm could cover up. It has been messing with her for a few weeks. You see, she loves her freaky family with all her heart. She could never live without them! But recently she has had some…different, feelings about a certain member of the flock. She feels like Fang has been giving her these weird looks every once in a while. And every time he looked at her she had this? Feeling? She doesn't know. It just… scared her. It made her stomach all queasy and her head feel all light. She was worried about it being her DNA unraveling, so she confronted Jeb. And get this. He thought she was funny! When she told him about the Fang Feelings all he had to say, (after laughing) was:

"Oh Maximum! I think that what you have is a crush! Oh, yes the pleasure of being young again! Ah, this is like my olden days. When I was in class with little miss Lindsay Lynch! Oh she was a sight! Long blond hair, and freckles that popped out of her little button nose…. Oh and she always wore a bow in her hair! *Sigh*… I wonder where she is now…"

"And he went on with that Lindsay girl for like a million bazillion hours. And he never even explained what a stupid crush is! I mean it could be a mass murderer for all I know!" said young Maximum to Fang when she told him about her dilemma. He looked confused also, because, well… hey, he was only ten!

"Maybe a crush is like a new fight move. These feelings you have might be yourself learning a new trick?" he inquired.

"I do not know. But you know what? It is FREAKING me out. On another hand, you can't tell the kids about this. It might be serious. I do not want them worrying about me. Ok?" Max said.

"Ok, Maxy." Fang said.

Maximum hated it when he called her that. She glared at him and they sat on her bed in silence, bored again. Fang started to look uncomfortable. He began to pace on her royal blue fluffy carpet. She loved that carpet. It reminded her of the sky on a stormy night. It reminded her of her mood when no one listened to her. It reminded her about her feelings for Fang: cloudy.

Fang reached over and grabbed her hand. It wasn't usually weird or uncomfortable for the both of them. They always did this because they were so close. But now, Max jerked her hand away. Those feelings that she had been feeling increased. She felt like there were butterflies in her stomach and her face got all red. Suddenly she didn't feel like talking to Fang right then and there. She just wanted him OUT.

"Listen Fang I think you should go. Um I'll talk to you later ok?"

Feeling like he was dismissed, Fang left Max's room. The door shut behind him, slamming it in his face. He walked away silently, thinking about her. Her long brunette curly hair, with the different color hair highlights. Blonde highlights, red highlights, black, different browns, just plain beautiful. He then thought about her eyes, her soft hands, her wings…

"Snap out of it man!" he thought quietly to himself.

Fang had recently been watching a lot of TV. Ever since Jeb had bought it for them. Iggy and Gazzy like watching sports and the experiment channel, but he got hooked on this show called "Lace & Luvin". Jeb always teases Fang about it. Fang does not know why though.

Anyway, he really loved that show. The day of the season finale, he had cried because it was over. But he never would have cried if the flock was there.

He was thinking about the last episode that he watched...

Fangpov:

The last episode that I watched of Lace and Luvin, (that is my favorite show in the universe) Sammi and Nathan FINALLY got together. They are so cute together. If I told anyone this though, I would never keep my tough guy image, so shut your face!

The thing that confuses me is that in the show, Sammi talks about this feeling she gets around Nathan, and I get those same feelings about Max. It really does not make any sense, because Maxy is like my sister. I mean, she is my sister! How can I feel like that around her?

The truth is, I like those feelings. When I am around Max, I am actually happy. I can't show it though.

And I have another thing to confess. Um, I kind of tricked Max. I actually know what a crush is. And now that I know that she feels the same way about me, I have to act on it…right?

Maxpov:

I had to make Fang leave! He just, I mean, I needed to, ugh! He made me feel like that again. The Crush Feeling.

So what the hell is the Crush? Sorry about the language, but seriously! It makes no sense! How am I supposed to find out if I am to survive with this? What if I am dying?

But, I kind of like that feeling. If this is dying, I am dying in pleasure. What. Is. Going. ON?

Narrativepov

Fang had watched that last episode in great concentration. He noticed that Nathan really crushed on this girl Sammi. He had to do something to realize what was going on. In the soap opera Nathan did this… thing, and Sammi immediately feel for him. And Fang really wanted to try it.

As he opened Max's door slowly, basically asking for entrance. He peaked his head in and looked around the room for Max. His eyes found her on her bed, looking like she was concentrating really hard on something.

"Maxy? Can I talk to you?" he asked. She looked up, shocked. She thought she was alone, but was worried of how long Fang was there. Can't she have peace and quiet?

"Sure, why not."

He came in and went over to sit on her bed, but thought against it on a last minute decision. He took her by the hand, and she didn't pull away this time. She looked down at her carpet, and her cheeks got red.

"Follow me, ok? Just listen. Please." He told her.

She got up, looking at him weirdly, like he was out of his mind. But she still went with him. He told her to close her eyes and follow him. She did it but was really confused.

When Fang made sure that Max couldn't see where they were going, he led her out to the backyard. He told her to open her wings but to keep her eyes closed. They flew together to the highest oak tree, where the branches were strong, wide and flat. They both sat on the same branch and Max took her hand away from her eyes. She looked around and smiled, seeing how the rest of the branches rested above them, sheltering them from the rest of the world. It was so beautiful.

"Fang, why did you bring me here?" she asked.

Maxpov:

"Well, it's kind of a long story… and I really don't like talking that much… but I'll do it for you, I guess," he stuttered out. I have never heard Fang stutter in my life. And what he said about the talking was true also. The only time he really talks is to me. But he never stutters…

"Just go ahead."

"Ok, well, um, ok it started when I was watching this show called Lace and Luvin." He began.

"You watch that?" I questioned.

"Um, yeah. Don't ask. Anyway, I was watching the season finale, and there are these two main characters. The girl character is Sammi Diamond and the boy was Nathan Socko. Nathan and Sammi always liked each other but no one wanted to tell the other. You see, they went to the same church, but Sammi never thought that Nathan would like her so she gave up on him! She tried to like this other guy but he was a jerk, so she gave up on him too! And all of a sudden Nathan asked her out!"

"You really get into this, don't you?" I asked him.

"Shut up. Now Sammi was like "What took you so long?"! Anyway, when they got really serious… wait I'm getting into something different. Anyway, you said you were having certain… feelings? Um, well I have them too. And I know what it is. And the way to find out how to cure them is to, um, well you have to do this thing, when you, um…"

"Gosh, spit it out Fang!" I laughed.

"I want to try something…" he said looking in my eyes.

"Well try it then."

"Gladly," he muttered.

Fangpov:

I had never done this before so I was kind of freaked out.

I looked at Max in the eyes and blinked. I concentrated on her face, her eyes, her nose, her lips, her freckles, and every other little detail. I took my hand and put it on the side of her face. I leaned in slowly, and brushed my lips against hers. Then we actually kissed! Just like Nathan and Sammi!

I pulled back and Max was actually blushing.

"What was that?" she asked.

"It's called a kiss. Everyone does it. Don't your butterflies feel better, or at least nicer?"

"Yea, I guess. It was really fun. Will we ever do that again?" she said looking at my lips.

I laughed and said, "Whenever you want."

She smiled and pecked me on the cheek. Then she unfolded her wings, almost knocking me over, and waved good bye. In a flash of brown, blonde, red, black, and white feathers, she dove down, out of the protective tree branches, and through the darkness into the light. Like an angel ( no pun intended ) she was there to rock my world, and then… she was gone. I sat there for a few minutes, collecting my thoughts.

One, I kissed Maximum Ride. That was the biggest one. I thought it would be nice, but I never thought it would be that cool.

Two, Nathan and I were kind of alike. We decided we wanted to do something that was really hard, and we went through with it.

Three, Sammi and Max were really alike. Both strong, independent girls, who got kissed by the guy who gave them butterflies.

Four, Max still did not find out what the Crush Feeling is.

And finally five, I KISSED MAXIMUM RIDE…

So, what do you guys think? Should I leave it as a one shot, or continue it? I really want to continue it, but if you guys don't want to, then…

I don't know yet. Anyway, the little blue button below has no friends. When you click it, it gets a hug. Give that button some hugs people!

"Thanks for your friendship and for your smile,

Thanks for the luv for that little while,

My heart was broken, my eyes did cry,

But now that its all over, I learned to say good bye"

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bye bye!

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