Hey so I The-Lady-of-Time, hi... anyway this is by no means my first fan fiction but it's the first I've ever posted online. I am very insecure about my writing but a close friend of mine told me it was good so I worked up enough of my Gyffindor nerve (despite being Slytherin hehe) to post this. I would absolutely adore some feedback of every and any kind to help improve my skills but please no flames. Alright please enjoy my first fic seen by more then mother and a few friends. :)
-LT
"I'm home" Harmony Pond calls as she bursts through the doors of the TARDIS.
"Sorry I was late… I was in Mesolithic England and lost track of time. Hey what's for dinner? Can we go to that restaurant in the 1920's? You know the one in LA with the…" she looks around to see a different interior then she's used to and a tall man with spiky dark brown hair wearing slim black rim glasses, a brown trench coat identical to her own, a pin stripe suit and converse.
"What? How did you get in here?" he said in what was most defiantly not the right accent.
"Oh buggery shit…" she said pulling her set of keys out of her pocket for him to see, "I got keys see. So yeah I'll see you in about, a hundred… hundred and fifty year. Remember to look after that coat yeah." Before the man could get a word in edge wise she disappeared back out the doors and true to her words didn't show up for roughly another hundred years.
Back on the right part of the timeline Harmony Pond this time sneaks onto the TARDIS to try not to get caught but there is the Doctor sitting in his chair on the console deck.
"You are in very big trouble…" he said but just fell slightly short of scary.
"Hi dad…" she smiles shyly, "so 1920's for dinner?"