This story is about the time when Auron gets transported over 30 million years into the past. The cave man era. He finds the cave folk are his teammates ancestors and tries to interact with them. But fails...
This is our first fan fic, we'd lovereviews, but please don't be too harsh!
Tidus - crouching over a log hmmm...ug tree?
Yuna – tree...tree?
Lulu – tree?
Auron – Yes a tree!
Yuna – tree! Tree!
Rikku – tree! Tree!
Auron – light it then
Yuna – light...light?
Lulu – light
Tidus – ug...ah...light?
Auron – fire, to light that log, ever heard of it?
Tidus – looks blankly at Auron ug, fire?
Yuna – fire...fire?
Lulu – fire?
Kimahri – fire?
Rikku – fire?
Auron – Yes! Fire! He walks over to the log and uses a weak fire spell on it
Tidus - glares at fire Fire...tree...
Auron – no...tree on fire. Get it?
Tidus – it?...ug it?
Yuna – treefirelightit!
Auron – NO! TREE ON FIRE! NOTHING TO DO WITH THE WORD 'IT' !
Wakka – wooooooood?
Auron – no, W-O-R-D!
Tidus – woooooood?
Yuna – wooooood?
Lulu – wooooooood?
Auron – NO, NO,NO! W – O – R – D !
Everyone - stares uncomfortably at Auron
Auron – go round the fire, it's warm
Tidus – warm?
Yuna – warm...warm?
Kimahri - shakes head ug, treefire...warm.
Tidus – treefire warm?
Auron – yes, the fire is warm
Lulu - sticks arm in fire, and then thinks ahhh...warm thinks again and screams AHHHHH!
Tidus – ahhh?
Yuna – ahhh...ahhh?
Rikku – ahhh!
Auron – yes Lulu, that would have hurt you. Don't do it again.
Tidus – hurt?
Auron - smacks himself in the face
Wakka – hurt?
Yuna – treefire warm...hurt?
Auron – yeah, kind of.
Tidus - put finger in fire AHHHH!
Auron – well don't do it then!
Rikku – then?
Yuna - then...then?
Tidus – tree fire ug warm...hurt! throws rock at Auron
Auron – ouch! Stupid. That hurts.
Lulu – hurts?
Tidus – STUPID!
Auron – right lets get this straight.
Kimahri – right?
Yuna – right...right?
Auron – right! You can also have right holds up right hand and left holds up left hand
Tidus – right stupid left ?
Wakka – woooooooood!
Auron – yes there all words. looks at cave roof please can I go home now?
Wakka – hooooome?
Tidus – Hoooome stupid hoooome!
Auron – YES! HOME! WHERE YOU LIVE!
Tidus – LIVE!
Yuna – live...live?
Lulu – live?
Wakka – leeeeeeeeeeve!
Rikku - slaps Wakka live!
Auron tears out his hair
Yuna - screams AHHHHHHH! Degalliug!
Tidus – Degalliug!
Auron – what's degalliug? Me? Log? Fire?
Kimahri - points to a black and red spot on the floor
Everyone (except Auron) – runs out of cave
Auron – what this? picks up the dot it's just a stupid ladybird!
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