This ist my first real fanfic

This ist my first real fanfic! Please reply! Should I continue?

"Sora? Have YOU seen Tai anywhere??" Matt asked the 17-year old girl.

"Not since we met in the park two days ago. I am really worried, he hasn´t phone me since that day. And he wasn´t at school!"

Matt looked dissapointed. He, Tk, Kari and all the other Digi-friends stood outside Sora´s apartment. They had looked for Tai for a couple of hours. Sora wanted to stay at home, perhaps Tai would call her.

Nobody knew where Tai could be. He had met Sora in the park, but they had a good, time together, nothing had happened, Sora said so. After they had been in the park, Tai had brought Sora home and wanted to go home, it was late. But there he would never arrive...

Especially Kari and Sora were worried about him. Kari loved her broter so much, she couldn´t believe he left himself.

And so Sora... Tai was her best friend since they had found each other when they were 5. She couldn´t understand either, why Tai wasn´t anywhere. He hadn´t say something to nobody, he had been happy the last days he was there.

"Let´s go inside" Sora said to the others. They did so, and went straight into Sora´s room.

"What are we going to do now? We have to find him! Perhaps something happened to him!" Kari said, still crying like the last days.

"Don´t worry, we´ll find him! Believe me!" Matt said with a smile to the younger girl. She smiled back sadly.

When the others talked about, what they should do, Sora said on the couch, thinking.

"Tai, where are you? What happened to you? You don´t run away from home, do you? Please...."

"Sora?" – "Yeah?" – "I think everyone needs some sleep. We have tried to find him for hours. We go home, ok? Shall we meet again tomorrow in the park?" Matt asked.

"Yeah!" everyone nodded, tired.

"Then let´s go!" So all of them went out. Sora laid down for some sleeping. But she couldn´t, she was thinking about Tai.

` I want to be with you, Tai! In your arms, looking in your deep brown eyes, knowing you´ll protect me...Tai, i love you!`

With this thought she fall asleep crying. Crying for half of the night...

At the same time.....anywhere....

"Where I am?" Tai tried to looked around to find out, where he was. But suddenly he felt a terrible pain in his leg and his head. He looked at his leg, he was badly injured, it looked like. And his head....perhaps he had been hit by something. He started to look around again.

He was in a very dark room. No light anywhere. He could hardly see the dark figure that stands in front of him.

"You´re awake, very good!" it said.

"Who are you ?" Tai asked. –"You know me. You won in our last fight a long time ago only with you friends help. With nothing you would have died!"

`Ìn our last fight?`

" But now, you´re alone! Nobody will help you!"

`What??? Is he....`

"Yeah, you´re right! I can see you´re worried face! I´m Piedmon! But now bigger and stronger than ever! You´ll see!Hahahahaha!"

"No, that can´t be!" Tai screamed at him! But now Tai could see him! It WAS Piedmon!

"What do you want, Piedmon?"

"to take revenge!"

Tai looked worried. What will it be going on?........