This is my First FanFiction ... Review please?
"Case!" My friend Lexi snapped me back to reality. "Lexi. What do you want!" "Casey were in math the bells about to ring! Get it together! My moms already here!" I basically lived at her house. I stood up, slipping into my shimmery, black size six flip flops. They didn't quite match my yellow skinny jeans but they matched my black sweatshirt hoodie thing I always wore. I had th hood over my hair. If anyone knew i was blonde they would freak out. "Beeeep" "god I swear that thing is more an alarm then bell" I grabbed my bag and followed Lexi out, staring at he newly colored, newly cut, red bob. I had a room at her house, where we kept our guard equipment I had a rifle and flag and she had a flag, rifle and a sabre. I got in the back seat and fell asleep. "Yo lexae." I heard a deep male voice, which is weird for a house consisting of lexy, her mom, and me. "Lex... Who's that?" "Dude! That's my brother!" She had a brother? " you have a brother?" "Yea he lived with my dad after a mishap a couple years ago..." I looked over at the 6" dude whom was giant compared to my 5" frame. He was shirtless And wearing baggy jeans, which would've been okay if not for the fact he was ripped! His brown crew cut emphasized his bright blue eyes, that contrasted against his dark tan. "It's rude to stare you know" he smirked at me and I turned around. "Lexi aren't you going to introduce us?" His voice sounded either flirty or sarcastic. " yeah. Casey this is crew. Crew this is case" he held out his hand "Casey.. Marie... Case for short.." I shook his hand "case? That's cute I'll call you cece..." I nodded and walked into my room. "What the hail!" All my stuff was in boxes and gone! "CREW!" he leaned against the doorway "oh was that your stuff? This is my room now you can sleep on that couch" I screeched and ran across the hall to lexis room, she followed after me, slamming the door. "Lexi how could he!" "Well he didn't know!" I looked at her. " he's driving us tomorrow. He goes to our school.." "Lex." I paused,"where do I know him from?" My body shook, "the memory. Lex." ". He left before you could've met him." Lexi passed the bowl of mnms my way since they were my favorite candy, when somebody knocked. "Honey don't spoil your dinner. I know your upset so were making your favorite! Chicken Alfredo with mushrooms and asparagus." "Thank you miss.c." She left the doorway and I pulled out my homework. "Hey" the Door flew open again "I think these are yours" he held up my only pair of lace underwear "found it in my dresser.." He threw them at me then walked away. I turned bright red and went to walk out to the dinner table. I stepped out to the hallway and got picked up by crew. "O MY GOD CREW PUT ME DOWN!" He eventually did when he put me in my chair. There was already a plate full of steaming food in front of me. "Bryant!" His mother called him by his middle name. "Lexis friend Casey will be treated as family. Treat her with respect. And she is off limits. " she glared then continued,". She will be staying here until-" "my parents are out of town.. Until they get back" I wasn't going to let him know one of my biggest secrets- where my parents really are...
I typed this on my iPod. Tell me if this is okay... I have more written.. Review plz