Yo! Chronix here with a rewrite of this chapter! Just a friendly reminder, this is a self-insert fanfic and there aren't that many self-insert fics for Naruto MultiXovers, so enjoy! This fanfic was inspired by 'The Accidental Rider' by Dark-Magician-41, 'The Forgotten Rider' by Ten-Faced Paladin, and some Doctor Who. Good stuff, just wish they would update.
Kazuma (male OC): You know this is like your third fanfic that you thought up, seriously! How many ideas do you have inside that head of yours?
Me: Enough to the point I space out sometimes and to the point where I have something similar to the writer's block, I call it an "Idea Overload."
Misaki (female OC): "Idea Overload?"
Me: I'll explain it later. Now without any interruptions, let's get on with the story. Can someone do the disclaimers?
Kazuma: I'll do it, UltraRiderSenshiChronix does not own ANY of the franchises mentioned below.
"Yo." human speaking
"Hi!" human speaking telepathically
'Hmm...' human thinking
"Foolish ningen." Bijuu, kaijin, kaiju, Ultra, robot, alien speaking
"You amuse me." Contract monster talking telepathically
Tch! Bijuu, kaijin, kaiju, Ultra, alien thinking
"Gundam, launch!" human speaking through the Gundam, machine speaking
"HENSHIN" driver/equipment voice
(Misaki: Before we start the story, a word from our author/creator):
"There's a theory that stated that there are multiple universes and/or multiverses outside of our own universe, some would say that the TV shows, movies, and video games we watched/read/played are actually real events existed in other universes. Most would think that theory was illogical, nonsense, or silly. But there are those who believed that the theory is true. I am one of them, because you never know what the future has in hold. Even if you can predict them, you'll never know if it went exactly as you predicted because there are so many possibilities and probabilities. So for those who don't believed in the theory, just wait and see what could happen in the future, considering if we live that long."
-Phat "Jimmy" Thanh Vu-
Also known as UltraRiderSenshiChronix, FanFiction Author
It is in the nature of humans to have a rather limited view over the reality around us and the whole universe in general. Many humans thought that there is only one universe. However, there are many other universes, countless of them. A cluster of universes with many similarities are often called a multiversen. The same definition can be applied to a cluster of multiverses called a megaverse. Now, you are probably thinking, 'Aren't multiverse and megaverse the same thing?' No, they are not.
Multiverse and megaverse are two different terms, they do not really apply to the same definition. Anyways, all of those things would combine together to form the Omniverse. An infinite collection of stars, planets, and universes, continually expanding until the end of everything. Inside the Omniverse exists every version of a specific planet inside each and every universe. The third planet from the star of the Solar System.
Earth.
It is also known by many other names. Sol III, Terra, Tellus, Gaia, Pale Blue Dot, Erde, Dìqíu, Chikyū, and in one case, Ravalox. Why is this planet so special you ask? It is a place with the highest concentration of light and darkness, a planet that attract things good and bad, a place upon which the outcome of the struggle between good and evil are decided. Each version have their own protectors and their own destroyers, forever fighting against one another. In the omniverse, there are those who protect it from the forces of evil. They are known as Majustors, beings that have transcended to a level beyond that of gods and devils, wielders of light and darkness, the sheer majesty of eternity running rampant inside their heads, they have faced many dangerous threats, felt unimaginable pain in order to protect what matters to them, and they have access to the powers of every hero and villain in the Omniverse. There are a total of fourteen Majustors. One in particular was the first Majustor in existence, the leader. One that have lived for a VERY long time. No one knew of him, very few knew of his existence and the legends. He had been missing for years, but soon he will return, and a lifelong battle will begin anew.
Dream Sequence
A figure was seen panting while climbing on what seems to be a tower made of black stone. The figure, a male, was exhausted and tired, but he kept on climbing.
"I... don't have... much time left..." he panted as he felt the remaining strength in him waning away, "No... not yet..!"
Despite the pain he felt, he kept climbing. After a couple of minutes, he finally reached the top. Upon reaching his destination, he fell to his knees in excruciating pain, coughing out blood as he did so.
"I didn't came here just to give up, must keep moving..." he said while struggling to stand up, "One step at a time...!"
Regardless of the intense fatigue he's feeling right now, he kept on walking until he reached. As he did, he remembered the people that had traveled with him in his many lifetimes. He had just finished visiting all of his living companions and friends. His mind drifted to the deaths of some companions and of those who died in his name. He felt a tear falling down his cheek as he remembered them all. He then eventually reached the center.
"I've made my decision." he silently declared, "It's time to go..."
The man looked at his hand to see a flame-like energy coming from crack. He would've said it was like a flowing rainbow, if he wasn't dying. While the world is counting down to the start of the new millennium, he was counting down to the time of his death. His body now looked like it was cracking while expelling energy from said cracks. He knew this was now the time, the time for him to be gone, and the time for a new millennium to begin. The citizens of the world rejoice as the Y2K problem was over with and begin the final countdown.
"10!"
"For every wrong that I ever caused..." he said with tears streaming down his face.
"9!"
"8!"
"7!"
"For every mistake I ever made..." he said sadly.
"6!"
"5!"
"4!"
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"I'm sorry..." he said for one last time, to all those who died in his name.
Those were his last words before bursting into a large pillar of energy that destroyed the tower.
"HAPPY NEW YEAR!"
As the people were celebrating a new beginning to the world, no one really noticed a pillar of light that looked like a blazing rainbow. A pillar that pierced the sky and the scream of sadness and despair came from within.
May 20, 2017 Peoria, IL. 2:15 AM
"AAAAHHHH!" a young teen screamed as he jolted awake from his sleep. He was seen sweating all over, panting as if he experienced something scary. The boy looked rather portly for his age, dark brown hair, dark brown eyes that seemed spooked, and, judging by his looks, he's Asian. Specifically Vietnamese.
"Those dreams again." he murmured. That was the third time this week that he had those kind of dreams.
"What to they mean?" he asked no one in particular before deciding to go back to sleep. Unknown to him, a shadowy figure was seen outside his bedroom window.
"And so it begins." the mysterious figure said before disappearing.
1:00 PM
The boy's POV
Sometimes I find life to be pretty boring, doing the same thing over and over again everyday, you know what I mean? The name's Jimmy Vu, I'm 14 yrs old (though I am 15 by international standards), I'm a big fan of tokusatsu and anime but I had little-to-none Japanese merchandise, I know some Japanese, I'm primarily a big fan of Kamen Rider, Ultraman, Gundam, and Naruto. I also like the Space Sheriffs, Super Sentai, and Super Robot Wars. I have also been a Whovian for nearly two years, and I never turned back! My mom is at work right now so I'm basically home alone. You see, my mom divorced my bastard of a father after so many years of verbal and emotional abuse. All of it happened last year, and I'll be honest, I was happy it happened!
Anyways, I never cosplay before since I don't how to make my own costume and my mom didn't have enough money to buy a costume or take me to an anime convention, let alone take me to Comic-Con or E3, since she's saving money to go back to Vietnam to visit relatives. At the very least, she bought me the Eleventh Doctor's Sonic Screwdriver.
I would have a lot of fantasies of me being a superhero of some kind. But not right now, I just lying on the couch at home, thinking about my life.
'Life can sometimes be cruel... and boring.' I thought then sigh, my life isn't always easy since I always got bullied back in Vietnam for being overweight, short, and worse of all, I was a weak, short-tempered crybaby. I don't have that many friends since I don't trust people that much, I don't want to be a burden to anyone since it seems that I can't do anything right, and I hate being pitied.
'What is with these dreams I'm having?' I thought. As of late, I've been having these strange dreams about a man on a tower screaming in despair. I've no idea what it means and I'm hoping I can figure it out eventually.
I lie on the couch, contemplating about the future, wishing for something to change my rather mundane life like a lazy slob that I am. I sighed and then fell asleep after playing with my Furno 3.0 and Sideswipe figures.
The Elemental Nations, Naruto Universe
Meanwhile, a certain pedophilic snake was working on numerous jutsus that he wanted to use in his quest to destroy Konohagakure (Hidden Leaf) in his laboratory situated in the new ninja village, Otogakure (Hidden Sound).
His current project, since he completed his immortality jutsu, was the Yondaime's signature jutsu. The faggot spread copies of his version of the formula all over the village in order to test it.
"This had better work." Orochimaru growled as he began flying though hand seals he thought was right. "Hiraishin no Jutsu!"
Orochimaru released the amount of chakra he thought was needed for the jutsu. The chakra connected with the seal on the other side of his lab and began to pulse. Orochimaru could tell something went wrong already as he's tensing his muscle in preparation to get away. He watched the reaction of the seal, however. What was the point of experimenting if you don't see the results?
The seal turned deep purple as it continue to pulse. It started to grow along with the copies around the village, the pulses grew faster as well. The Snake Sannin backed away further as he watched the seal started reaching critical mass, the seal grew to the size of the doorway before energy began crackling along the lines. The crackling energy became more rampant before the entire seal erupted in a bright violet light which threatened to engulf the entire lab. Although no one in the village could hear an explosion, they sure felt the impact that threw the residents several feet before they hit a solid surface behind them.
All through the Elemental Nations, the shockwave could be felt on disastrous levels. Through the mists of Kirigakure (Hidden Mist), the air currents actually caused several locations shrouded in mist to become clear for awhile. In Sunagakure (Hidden Sand), the youngest of the Suna Siblings felt the pulse and the beast within him growled, feeling some unease with the feeling in the air. In Iwagakure (Hidden Stone), the surrounding mountains began to shake and rumble, causing landslides. In Kumogakure (Hidden Cloud), lightning and thunder crashed wildly for a while as the shockwave passed through their territory. Finally, in Konohagakure (Hidden Leaf), the resident blonde prankster shivered in his sleep as the Kyuubi within him felt the shockwave and became suspicious. No matter what they think of it, the inhabitants of the Elemental Nations were oblivious to the changes that it would bring to their world and beyond.
The shockwave break through the dimensional barrier surrounding that universe and spread all over the neighboring universes, eventually making its way to the entire Omniverse. The inhabitants of every universe imaginable feel a sense of foreboding, as if something had disturbed fabric of eternity. Their many guardians, heroes, destroyers, and protectors all felt it as the shockwave pass through them. All of a sudden, orbs of light came out of their bodies and gather towards one version of Earth, one that stood at the center of the Omniverse since its very beginning, ours.
On an ancient platform outside of the Omniverse, symbols began to glow all thoughout with a kanji for 'Seal' appearing on the center of its surface. What lies within the seal is something that must never be free, an evil older than the Omniverse itself. The shockwave's path ended when it hit the seal, creating a small crack on it. Dark energy flow out of the crack and an ominous roar can be heard inside the platform.
"Soon, I will escape out of this accursed prison. All will feel the might of Improbus, starting with you, Drifter...!" a voice declared as the ancient entity wait for its freedom.
Jimmy's Universe
3rd person POV
We see Jimmy sleeping on his couch, a rare occurence to him. As he slept, a rainbow-colored portal appeared in the living room.
"WHAT THE FUCK!?" he screamed as he was abruptly awake from his nap and saw the portal.
"Uh oh." he said as he was being sucked into the portal.
"SHIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT!" he screamed as he get sucked into the portal along with his iPhone 6 Plus, earbuds, laptop, wooden wakizashi, Nerf gun, the MechTech Deluxe Sideswipe action figure, and Furno 3.0.
It would be hours before his mom came home to find her son missing.
Eternity Vortal
"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!" Jimmy screamed as he was falling to who knows where.
1st person POV
"HOLY SHIT!" I yelled as an orb of light are heading towards me, and then my life flashed before my eyes. I saw myself crying all the time throughout my childhood over the simplest of injuries, I cried when anyone scold at me, even till now! I can't even do anything right, with or without anyone's instructions! I'm a scaredy cat who's afraid of some basic things in life! I admit it, I'm a bit of a shy person who can't stand up for himself when he was little. All of the bad things I went through are all coming back to me as the light came towards me.
3rd person POV
As Jimmy is engulfed in the light, his body was slimming itself up and getting rid of all the excess fat. His mind felt like it was ripping itself apart and mending it back again. Jimmy screamed in agony as information began to pour into his brain like water pouring into a bucket, but it overflowed. A portal opened in front of him and he fell in.
Somewhere in Nami no Kuni, at night
In the sky, a portal appeared out of nowhere and out of it, was our protagonist, his stuff, and six other people? Let's watch.
1st person POV
My head buzzed in pain that was matched by what my eyes were feeling at the moment. I could feel the grass beneath me that was slightly moist, I could feel some humidity in the air along with hearing some waves crashing in the distance. I was either near a lake or the ocean, I'm not entirely sure where I am.
"Ugh..." I groaned as I felt the impact when I land on the ground.
As I slowly regain my bearings, I heard someone else groaning. I turn my head to see something that should be impossible, I saw Furno 3.0, MechTech Sideswipe, Knight Gundam, what seems to be a silver-furred, gold-streaked wolf pup with small wings, and two girls.
'Okay, stop dreaming, Jimmy. They are not real!' I thought.
"You are not dreaming." a voice said in my mind.
"Hang on, I need to make sure." I said before punching myself in the face.
"Okay, not dreaming." I murmured. It was at that moment that I finally noticed the voice in my mind.
Wait a minute, who the hell are you? Why are you in my mind?! I thought frantically, fearing that I finally lost my mind.
"One, you did not lose your mind." another voice replied, this one female, and she heard my thoughts. "And two, you'll just have to find out for yourself."
Let me guess, I have to do something in order for you to reveal yourself, am I right? I 'talked' to the voice but only hearing silence from the other end. I'm gonna take that as a yes.
As I finished talking to the voice, my body felt strange, as if all the fat and calories from my body was melted away. It was then that I look down and saw my two feet! I didn't even have bend down a bit just to look at them! I look at my arm to see that it now has lean muscles! My stomach is now flat and my body now had some definition!
"HOLY SHIT?!" I yelled, shocked at the fact that my toys are now the real thing and my body's sudden change.
A moment later, Furno turned around and said,
"Can you stop yelling? It's starting to hurt my ear-" before he stopped, look at his hands, move them, then he lands his eyes at me and yelled, "I'M ALIVE!"
"SO AM I!" yelled out Sideswipe as he look at his, now real, body.
Meanwhile, the sentient Gundam was walking to a nearby lake to look at his reflection and needless to say, he was shocked when he saw himself in the suit of armor he had before he disappeared from the Saddarc World after defeating the Demon King.
He then look at me and asked, "Hey, can you touch me? I want to check if I'm in a new body or not." in a normal tone instead of his echoing tone that he had as an antagonist in the game.
I was confused at first, but then I remembered that he transports his spirit to who-knows-where with his lifeless Mobile Suit left behind at the end of Dynasty Warriors: Gundam 3, so I did what he said and touch him. I was surprised went my hand didn't go through him. Knight Gundam was shocked as well when my hand touched his shoulders.
"I really am in a new body...!" he murmured in surprise.
While that was happening, I noticed the two girls waking up and looking rather disoriented. One is wearing a white tee with navy blue jacket on the outside, a black skirt reaching her knees with white edges, tan-colored stockings, and a pair of dark brown school shoes. She has emerald eyes that look breathtaking in my opinion, and flowing, white hair with red tips that reach the small of her back. The other is wearing black jean shorts, a red tank top, a light grey hoodie embroidered with claw marks on the back. She has striking, azure eyes, and short, auburn hair extending the tip of her chin. Both girls are Asian. I find myself blushing at their appearances, which in itself is a bit rare since I barely do that, never have I seen anyone so beautiful right in front of my face! Both girls noticed my gaze for a moment before I raised my left eyebrow and asked, "You alright, there?"
They look surprised and the one with the long hair ask, "Y-You can see us...?!"
"I can see you." Furno replies. "We all can, right?"
We all nod to his answer while I shake the blush off. It was then that the two check themselves and each other out, having from what I can register, astonished expressions. Wonder why they seemed so shock that we can see them?
"What are your names?" I asked the two girls, finding myself enchanted with their eyes. The fact that they have VERY nice bodies is an added bonus. I can't help but knowing they seem familiar for some reason.
The two girls look at each other before the white-haired one answers, "Jenna. Jenna Le."
I looked at her and ask, "Are you Vietnamese, by any chance?"
"Um, yeah!" she replies, though she seems a little nervous.
The auburn-haired girl then said, "Atsuko Kajiwara."
"Nice to meet you both!" I said with a grin. The duo grin back and Atsuko said, "Very nice to meet you!"
Then we heard something whimpering, we all turn around to see the wolf pup with small wings. I walk toward it, crouch down so we were on the same level, and asked, "You alright, bud?", with a smile.
"A-Are you guys going to h-hurt me?" the winged wolf pup asked with fear laced in its voice and its body tensed.
I was surprised that I'm hearing a REAL talking wolf, Furno seemed surprised that that the pup can talk, Knight Gundam on the other hand, doesn't seemed to be surprised by this. I shook my head for a bit and answered,
"Of course we won't, we never hurt the innocent." the pup look at me straight in the eye with its own yellow eyes. After a while, the wolf relaxed a little bit.
"You know what, I'm gonna name you... Tsubahane, because of your wings." I said with a grin. The pup smiled when he heard his new name. Suddenly, a glaring flash of light appeared, making all of us cover our eyes. When the glare went down, my eyes widen at the contents.
No... No! I thought in my head as I hold in my hand an Organization XIII Black Coat and looking at five other copies of it lying on the grass.
"Well..." I joked while looking at this impossible group. "At least I won't go out looking like I just got out of bed!"
It's true though, I sleep in these clothes. A plain white tee and a pair dark indigo shorts. I notice Jenna and Atsuko giggling from either my appearance, or my joke. The others just shrug, scanning over my clothes. It took me a while to see my stuff was all over the place. My phone, the case for my glasses, my tablet/laptop, a gun, and my wooden wakizashi. I pick the wakizashi up, but I notice the blade is a little heavier than usual. When I unsheathe the sword, imagine to my surprise that it was real! I then pick up the gun and examine it.
"What the hell happened to my Nerf gun?!" I murmured, my eyes widening. What used to be my Nerf gun, an orange Firestrike, is now something else. The gun retains its shape, but the Nerf logo is gone and was replaced by a yin-yang circle with four tomoe in red, blue, green, and yellow. At the center of the circle was a 16th century taijitu. The barrel has the four dragon heads engraved on both sides. One platinum, one gold, one silver, and one bronze. The darts were also gone. I place the blade back in its wooden sheath, grab my stuff, wear the coat, and begin walking. The others grab their coat and follow me to the unknown.
Nami no Kuni
3rd person POV
After what seems to be an eternity of walking, which was only an hour or so, the group of seven finally found a village. It looked okay from a distance and there was a river running through it with boats. Of course, looks can be very deceiving. When the group got closer to the village, they saw that a lot of it was run down and everyone looked just as poor. The few merchant stalls that were there had very little of anything to buy. Lots of people were just leaning on walls with signs showing their willingness to do a job or find work. The rest were either walking along or just slumped against the walls, not doing anything. Of course, some of them were giving the group odd stares, or to be more precise, Jimmy's gun and Tsubahane. Most of the group are wearing the Black Coats, with Jimmy, Jenna, and Atsuko letting their hoods down.
As the group of seven turned around a corner to get a better feel for the village, Jimmy suddenly felt something, or someone, tugging his pants. Turning around quickly, he saw a little kid wearing torned up clothes tugging with all his might, try to pull the gun off. He looked up to see that he was busted and had a fearful look on his face. To be honest, Jimmy was tempted to get angry, but upon seeing the miserable condition of this village, that anger died a quick death.
Knight Gundam's POV
When I saw the living condition the village was in, I clenched my fist in anger. I have been to many universes, I have seen many suffer due to being abused, hunger, and war. Many children were orphaned due to so many wars, many have died in the battlefield, and so many have died young.
When I saw my current surroundings, I knew that there is a tyrant oppressing these innocent people. Also, I know that we're in the Elemental Nations since I've been here before when I was a still a disembodied spirit, and I can sense nature chakra.
Anyways, I was looking at Jimmy, waiting to see the boy's reaction. At first, I thought that he was going to get mad, but to my surprise, his reaction was this,
"Hey, if you go away, I won't say or do anything about it and give you some candy." he said quietly so only the kid could hear.
"Really?" the kid gaped. I guess people usually give a big fuss when the little kid had to steal something. I then saw Jimmy nod and gave him some pieces of candy, at which the kid had a big grin.
"Thanks, onii-chan!"
I look at the kid, who tried to steal the gun Jimmy had, running away. I turn my head to see a sad look on Jimmy's face.
"What had happened here that made this place so miserable..." he said in a sad tone.
He seems to have the kind heart. I thought approvingly. I also notice that the two girls smiled fondly at him for a moment.
3rd person POV
"Okay, first thing to do is to get a map." Jimmy mutters to the rest of the group, trying to get his thoughts in order.
"We can find out where we are from there, then we can try to figure out how to get back to our respective universes." he continue.
For some reason, they felt tense, even though nothing had happened yet.
"HELP!" a woman's voice cried.
Maybe that was the reason why.
The group dash toward the sound of the cries. Jimmy, Furno, Sideswipe and Tsubahane hope that it wasn't something serious. Knight Gundam and the two girls on the other hand, know that it was a cry for help as the sentient mecha has heard it many times, and apparently, the girls too. Unfortunately, for the former four, the apparent situation was very serious. There was a black-haired woman who seems to be in her late twenties to early thirties, who was noticeably cleaner than the rest of the villagers so she might have been better off. Clutching her leg in fear was a small boy, with the same black hair as the woman's, who looked terrified. The reason for their fear was that there were ten thugs with swords surrounding the two. In the back of his mind, he had a feeling that he have seen them somewhere before. Meanwhile, Knight instantly recognize who those two are and why they were targeted.
"We warned your old man about building that damn bridge," the apparent leader growled. "I guess he's going to learn the price for opposing Gato!"
Gato!? The same one from the Naruto Wave Arc!? If it's true, than those two are...! Jimmy thought as soon as he heard Gato's name.
All six goons slowly raise their blades as they started walking towards the frightened mother and son. Jimmy's eyes widen when he saw that the thugs were dead serious in what they were doing. They were actually going to kill this woman and her son, that makes his blood boil.
"Guys, come with me." said Jimmy in a steady tone as he slowly inched toward the alley.
"Jimmy! What the hell you doing!?" asked Furno.
"I'm going to beat those fucking bastards!" Jimmy replied, his eyes glow in many colors for a moment. Knight Gundam was the first to notice.
That glow in his eyes, I can't help but feel like I've seen it before. Knight thought as he look into Jimmy's eyes. Who are you, Jimmy Vu.
He wasn't alone, Jenna and Atsuko see it also, and it made them smile nostalgically for some reason.
Furno smirked when he saw that look in Jimmy's eyes and said, "Well, we can't stop you, can we? We'll help!"
Jimmy look to see the other five nod.
"All right then." said Jimmy. He motion the group to follow him, each person crouch stealthily in the direction of the thugs. The child notice them crouching to said thugs. Jimmy look at the kid and motion him to be quiet. The teen slowly got up and quickly put him in a chokehold, the other goons look alarmed.
"NOW!" Jimmy practically barked as the rest of the group charge upon the goons. The girls team up on one thug, Atsuko punch him in the gut and Jenna kicks him in the face. One thug is trying to slash Knight Gundam, keyword being try. The blade breaks upon impact, the thug look like he was about to piss his pants, and Knight knocks him out with a sucker punch. Tsubahane was flying around another thug while the latter is attempting to chop the former into pieces, the winged wolf fly high and plunge into the goon, biting him on his right arm. The goon screams in pain while trying to get the wolf off him. Furno is hacking another thug with his bladed plasma bow, he fires an arrow at him, nicking the thug, and he screams in pain. Sideswipe is currently playing with one thug, using his feet wheels dodge the sword strikes.
"Missed me." Sideswipe says jovially as he dodge one strike and another. "Missed me again!"
"Let's get this over with." he says, getting close to the thug, put his left arm on the latter's shoulders, and make his arm wheel spin. The thug screams from the friction.
The leader that was under Jimmy's chokehold manage to get out, but got kicked in the butt by the teen. The lead thug turns around with angry look on his eyes and attempts to slash the young teen. Jimmy's eyes widen in alarm, but his body automatically jerks to the left, dodging the attack.
How did I do that? he thought, before dodging another slash.
Jimmy takes out his wakizashi and parry the thug's sword. He then takes out the gun and shoot the ground, making the thug jump in fright. Taking advantage at the distraction he made, Jimmy kicks the leader in the face and slash his chest. The leader backpedal in pain as the thugs regroup. All of them are panting from exhaustion, looking at the group in fear. Jimmy glares at them with a scary look in his eyes.
"If we see you dumbasses threatening them again," he says, points the gun to the sky, and fires. "Expect this to happen."
A pigeon drops to the ground dead, the thugs look frightened.
"Let's get the fuck outta here!" said the leader and all of them run away.
The group relaxed, Jimmy sheath the wakizashi, and hide his gun under the coat. The boy turns to the mother and son.
"Are you two alright?" he asked.
To be continued...
This is a rewrite to the original chapter that will fit in to what I envision the story will become. The chapter 2 that I haven't wrote in a very long while will be getting a rewrite as well. Some of the concepts that will be seen in The Majustor Series will be inspired by many series I've taken a liking to. I'm even thinking of integrating several things from that one famous scene in the Doctor Who 50th anniversary special to a special chapter in the future. What you will see in the coming months and years will be spectacular.
UPDATE 01/01/16: I changed a lot of things due to some changes in plot and in order to keep up with my current ideas, I removed the first fighting scene, and changed the second fighting scene.
P.S.: I am so, so, sorry everyone, I've been so busy with a crap ton of stuff over the past year so I apologize for not updating any of my stories. I hope you all can forgive me! I started sophomore year a few months ago and things have been hectic.
Kazuma: Not to mention you put our stories on HIATUS!
Naruto & Misaki: *nodding*
Me: Don't worry, you'll appear in the future chapters of this story.
Misaki: And when will that be?
Me: No idea. So... review this story, flames are ignored, and I'll see you all next time. Peace! Oh, and Happy New Year!