Ok so...this is my first story (not o-s) and as i said before this 'came' to me while i was reading Live&Evl by BK-BlackKnight, the concept is pretty much the same...idk if this counts as 'stealing' since the story and the plot is diff. Anywaaaaay please tell me what you think of it
R&R love -Dia
She didn't have to leave me….she could have stayed.
'I have to go, I'm stuck between 2 worlds apart, I want to let go. I'm going to miss you from the very bottom of my soul'
She wasn't going anywhere, I knew it and so did she. She was stuck between death and life, forever. She was just so fucked up! Even so she decided to leave me behind instead of spending that little time, a mortal person life, my life with me. She left and never looked back. That is when I decided, if she wasn't going to willingly come back to me I will hunt her down and drag her back here kicking and screaming.
I saw her just a couple of times since then, she was more beautiful, each time her hair seemed to shine more, her eyes to grow wider, her legs longer and her petite body slimmer.
It was hurting thought, for getting her back first I had to catch her, to catch her I had to hurt her, something that I didn't want to do.
Once was near this lake dancing…her hair moving around blending in with the midnight sky. Her eyes giving on more light then the moon and starts. Her smooth white skin just like porcelain. Perfection.
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"It's late, you should go"
I knew he wasn't going to give up so fast, his patience was growing short, I pushed and pulled him around a lot. His grip on my hand got tighter and right now my position, sitting in his lap, was rather painful. Lust, was all I saw in his brown eyes, nothing more, not a hint of love. I was wasting my time.
"it's only 8 in the evening"
"I know, however this isn't an appropriate place for a man, not like you, not with a loving girlfriend and serious. Maybe another time…"
His eyes soften and he brought me even closer almost in an attempt to melt my body into his, my legs stared to be numb. I raised my hand, cupped his cheek and gave him the most normal smile I could master. He was boring me to death.
"I won't leave, you know that. I'll be here tomorrow as well"
"I know, but a few more minutes won't get us caught."
He might be right, but I was sick of him, his face, his voice, his everything, he was a waste of time, just an unfaithful boyfriend, a damned male. I sighed and pushed myself away from him. Getting off and now standing in front of him with my hand under my chin slowly moving it from right to left in a disapproval manner.
"Hinata ? what's the matter love?"
"This isn't fun anymore, you're boring me"
"…what are you talking about ?! I-I love you"
I smiled, he told me that a lot, especially the past few days. He was insane, but…I'm not the one to talk, am I? His eyes were pointed at me, teeth clenched and lips pressed.
"How much ?"
"Very much!"
"More than your girlfriend ?"
"So much more, you can't even compare yourself to her!"
Such a faker, cheater, a heart beating with no purpose, a mouth consuming air and a person wasting my time.
"Prove it, would you give your beaten heart for me? Would you care enough to give your last breath for me ?'
"Of course I would!"
Good, you just made a deal with the devil. He was willingly giving me his heart, in words. But nowadays words meant nothing. I sighed. His eyes were still distant, he was only imagining the things we would do, dumb, he wasn't what I was looking for, he was so far away from my perfection.
"Maybe….after all you're just a waste of time"
"What?!"
It took me a second to open the little jar in my poked. Another second to get my hand through his body and take away his soul. I think that dying by the hand of a soul eater is one of the best ways, no pain, no struggle not even a second. You don't even know you died until you reach your place in heaven or hell.
"…Such a pity, 10 days wasted on nothing."
Sometimes I feel bad for doing such things. I look at their lifeless body and 'feel' sadness, yet today wasn't the case. Days thrown outta window, I am not the one to complain thought….I would live forever.
I am a soul eater, yet with no experience, I am at a very young age, only 23 yet a soul eater for less than 5 years. I was dumb enough to give an old soul eater, a handsome one, my heart willingly, at that time when he told me to prove it, to do all that strange things...it didn't seem suspicious, yet I was young, and crazy in love. Once with me being a soul eater came the death of that man, now his name isn't something I can remember, only his eyes are still stuck on my mind.
I never ate a heart, it was supposed to be 'better' then just the empty soul, yet I couldn't bring herself to take one, unlike taking souls that would hurt, the person would scream, cry, beg and he wouldn't die the very next second. His eyes would slowly lose their light while staring at me, I would see how slowly the water of death covers the eyes, how they slowly close, his mouth slightly opens and breath stops all of a sudden ,his chest never coming up and down again. I was a human once, even if my heart stopped a while ago when I hear screams it still hurts, a feeling of guilt, of sadness, loneliness. Then I remember, people will pass me by, I will watch them grow old next to their loved ones and then leave the world of being, I would be stuck here forever with my own thoughts, this was my own hell.
'Maybe…I should try next time.'
It was tempting to take this man's heart, he was dead, he wouldn't scream, yet an unbeaten heart was nothing more and an organ, I could get an illness, and having to struggle with that for eternity wasn't really appealing. I closed my eyes and I was already out of the door, it was always so calm when I leave, yet the next day after a death there was panic all around the city, once the sun rises and its rays touch it the body turns into dust, yet in time people understood that a pile of dust means a person's death, yet they never did anything about it…foolish.
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"Medic!I need a medic!"
"Yes, what's the problem Naruto?"
"Sakura-chan, Choji was cut by one of the enemies in the last fight and it seems to have infected."
"….Very well Naruto, go get from my tent my bag and bring it here now!"
"Yes!"
Around the camp was a mess, people were screaming others were running around…a mess!
Naruto is a good friend, and a wonderful person. I didn't even blink and he was out of the tent. But it isn't the time to have such thoughts, I have to see his injury, I rose the hem of his shirt only to see a middle-depth wound infected really bad. This was going to take longer than expected…
"Here you go Sakura-chan"
"….Naruto, go tell everyone to pack….we're leaving now! With some luck we'll be in the nearest village in less than 3 hours!"
"Very well Capitan!"
It feels so weird people to call me that, Tsunade-sama made me the Capitan of the west crew, yet Naruto or Sasuke would have been better….maybe not Naruto…he isn't really….the smartest. I sighed it will be a long way to the Capital…
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"GUYS! The Capitan said to pack, we'll be leaving in a bit!"
"Yet sir!"
"I thought the plan was to spend the night here and leave in the morning so we'll get to the capital in one day…"
"Ohh Sasuke, yes that was it but, it seems like many people are hurt and Sakura-chan wants to get to the nearest village to treat them"
"….I see"
Even if we won, people died, people are hurt, I told Tsunade-sama it was a mistake to let 'kids' come, many of the deaths would have been avoided. Being part of the war at only 14 years is something…wrong. Anyway…I should just pack as the dobe said.
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The night was quiet, yet the bar I work at is always full, this day wasn't any different, men were talking loudly and having a great time as usually…I wasn't thou.
"Hinata-chan, can you please bring me some more sake!"
Drunk men were the worst, this village was getting boring, I stayed too much time here, people now knew how my face looked. At the end of the week I have to leave, he would find me here…
Suddenly the gates opened, men on horses cheering, women
crying of happiness, children screaming were coming. Just my luck, solders were passing thought, they were coming from war, looks like the war between the Water and Fire land ended, the least winning. Yet along solders came hunters, I have to pay attention. They were all going to Konoha, the capital.
That night was a huge party, the solders stopped by to 'sleep' they say, yet it was almost sun rise and I am pretty sure none of them closed an eye. They were drunk, tired, vulnerably. Perfect targets, I have to be careful not to mess with a hunter thou .
Walking around the town poring sake here and there, I can feel the men looking at me, yet I am looking for something, not sure what, but something. A moment of daydreaming and now the sake was all over the ground, myself and this man in front of me.
"…I am very sorry"
"No I think it was my fault, are you alright ?"
The man got up and helped me as well, pulling me with such a force I hit his chest. His power was big and so was his chest, board.
"Ohh sorry, I didn't think you'd be so light."
Eyes wide open on the man's forearm, a tattoo, an arrow, a silver one. The blood froze inside of me, a hunter.
"It's fine no worries…"
I slowly tried to push myself away. I looked at the man's face. Ocean-blue eyes, shining blonde hair, tanned and very…very beautiful. I couldn't help but awe in shock, this man was handsome, a masterpiece, perfection, suddenly the arrow came back to my mind and once again I awkwardly tried to distant myself from him. His hand had a firm grip on my small one, I could easily brush it off…but it would be suspicious to do so…he gave me a cheeky grin and lowered his face to look at me better, panic rushed through my veins.
"You're really beautiful"
The shock couldn't be helped and my breath hiccupped in my throat , eyes opened wider if possible, once again the arrow came to my mind. Heh…I'm playing with fire, damn it Hinata! Get a grip!
"T…Thank you, but I should really go and help serving the sake"
"yes…of course"
With a hint of disappointment he let go of my small hand. At least he didn't seem to be suspicious…it's a good thing the sake covered my smell. I was in danger, yet when I turned around his eyes were still on me. Eh…looks like I found my ticket for a free journey to the Capital.
After some more glasses of sake poured, I once again came face-to-face to this man, I couldn't help but smile when I saw him, he didn't see me though, he was way too into talking with some of his friends.
"More sake ?"
"Huh Oh ye-"
Then he turned and his eye got wider so did his smile. Happiness could be easily read on his sunny face.
"Hey, looks like we meet again"
"It seems so"
I slowly poured some more sake into his and his friends cup.
"are you still busy ?"
"ah…not really…my shift ended a while ago but I wanted to help some more…the bar is busier then usually."
"I see, ohh right I never got your name"
"I am Hinata, what about you young sir ?"
"Hinata, such a perfect name, and I am Naruto."
His friends slowly left me with him, he seemed more drunk now, hopefully he wouldn't notice that I am a soul eater.
"you won the war, didn't you ?"
"Ohhh Yea, he-hee. We kind of came out of nowhere and invaded your city, didn't we ?"
"I am sure everyone is happy about your arrival…are you going to the capital ?"
"mhm, we'll be leaving in the morning"
"….I see"
I faked a bitter-sweet smile, was he falling for it ? I hope he was, I didn't really have time to approach anyone else until they left, and leaving with them would be so much more normal then just getting my things and leaving next week.
"you want to come ?"
….Wow, it was so much more easier than expected…this person wasn't really thinking straight, was he ? I was stunned for a moment…stunned and shocked but I couldn't help a smile.
"…c-can I ? I d-don't wanna bother".
"ohh you wouldn't bother us at all! Come with me"
Without a hesitation he took my hand and led the way to a few tents further away from the lively street. Into the biggest one in sight.
"Sakura-chan!"
"Naruto, I am working as you can see!"
This person…Sakura, was….cute, yet something was off, even with her exotic pink hair and green eyes, small figure and tanned skin…she was not beautiful, something was missing…I can't really piece it together, but I am sure of it.
"…..Yea yea, I was wondering if we can take someone with us?"
Sakura stopped, she hadn't drink at all, her tent was the biggest, it is only natural to think she is the Capitan or someone important if Naruto asked her for permission…she was smart, thinking , it was either I make her like me or I am doomed. A moment of silence and then she rose her face to look at us. That was wrong, her face, her arm they had scars, huge ones. One began from her pointer finger and up losing itself inside her shirt, another began near her mouth and ended near her eye. Sometimes, when the lighting was right it seemed to be just a shadow.
"why would we take her?"
"she can help!"
"…With what ?"
"…ehh, Hinata what can you do ?"
"…I can, there isn't much I am good at… I can cook, I learned to read and write, I can…help around as a nurse I guess…"
Before I was turned into a soul eater I was part of an important family both in the Wind and Fire land. I was forced by my father to learn this together with my older cousin and my little sister.
"SEE! There are plenty things she can do in the Capital! Even if it doesn't seem so there aren't many people that can write and read, we need all of them!"
...There was a moment of silence, and a sigh.
"Fine, she can come"
I smiled at Sakura and thanked her with a low bow and I could see her cheeks being dusted by a light blush. Together with Naruto I returned to the busy streets.
"Thank you so very much Naruto-san"
"It's cool call me Naruto, Hinata"
He winked at me and that was the signal that I had to leave. I excused myself saying I should go helping around the bar once again. Now that I finished with this I had to stay as far away from him as I can.
Hope you liked it x3