ok guys this is a new story, im experimenting and i want to know what you think about this first part of chapter one. until i get some reviews i wont update, not to be mean but we have snow and i have to shovel and power is limited around here lately.
ok so R&R
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EPOV
"Bella come on Jacob and Nessie are ready to go."
"Edward stop rushing me! We'll be fine, Alice and Jasper can't start without us."
"She gets prettier and bigger everyday." Jacob said picking Nessie up.
"That she does, Jacob go pick a car and we'll be right out."
"As always."
I looked at Jacob and he smiled and went. He knew what was good for him.
"Bella what's taking you so long?" I asked walking into the room.
Bella was done. She looked utterly amazing as always.
"I've been done. I just hate this dress"
"Even as a vampire you complain about fashion."
"Even as a vampire you tell me how slow I am, even though I could still take you out."
"I'm accustomed to going fast Bella."
"We have forever. No need to rush."
We walked out and I saw Nessies blanket on the couch.
"I should bring that.""Where's Nessie and Jacob?"
"In the car. Why?"
"I smell blood."
"Bella they are fine. I would have smelt it too."
"Wrong. I still have more keen scents then you as of right now."
"True." Bella picked up the blanket and ran out of the house with the worst possible scenarios running through her head.
I walked through the house to the garage. And just as I said. They were fine. In the back seat of the Volvo.
Jacob had his hand in both of Nessies little hands.
Bella was in the car looking at Jacob and Nessie. I got in the car and looked in the rear-view mirror.
I smelt the blood, it wasn't a lot though. Fresh and small. Jacobs face had pain stained on it.
"What's wrong?"
"She bit me."
"Pull your hand free."
"She'll cry. She has all morning, if she can't see me or touch me."
"She's sleeping."
"Bella stop worrying about me, and lets go." Jacob had something on his mind, but he held it in well.
We got to the place and Bella got out. Jacob was unbuckling Nessie from her car seat and I opened his door. Bella opened the other door and went to take Nessie.
"Bella I have her, go you'll be late."
"She's my daughter. I have her."
"My hand is in her mouth and her hands."
"Pull it out."
"Not unless your in the mood for total temptation."
Bellas next move was unexpected. She pulled Nessie to her and Jacobs hand was covered with blood.
"Son of a bi."
"Jacob, put your hand out of the car, ill go get Carlisle."
"Edward, just go in, ill be in in a second."
He was going to turn.
"No Jacob you're one of the best men, you cant."
"Edward your daughter is hysterical crying and no one can calm her down except for me."
"Jacob please, Alice wants this to go good, not let this be a wreck."
"Jasper can't even calm her."
Both of us looked at each other and his hand. Completely healed, just a scar.
"Ready to go? God Jacob, Nessie has never cried like that before."
"Edward please, she needs me."
"I know, and im happy about that. Relieved, she wont have to get her heart broken."
"I would never."
"I know."
Nessie screamed. Both Jacob and I ran in, no one was there except our family.
"Bells, what's wrong with her?" Emmett asked
"Bella give her to Jacob." I said
"Bella please she's in pain." Jacob said. "Nessie im right here, stop crying please, look Im right here." Jacob cooed into her ear.
She stopped screaming but she was crying.
"Let me calm her down Bella." Jacob plead
I looked at my wife and saw it in her eyes.
She gave Nessie to Jacob and told him they had to talk.
Jacob got Nessie to stop crying completely and they walked outside.
I could hear it all.
"What Bella?"
"She's having nightmares.""I know."
"Why doesn't she want me?""You don't know what the nightmares are about."
"Tell me."
"I cant. She's afraid."
"Afraid of what?"
"Not right now Bells."
"Jacob if you don't tell me this second I swear." Bella stopped
Nessie bit Jacob again. It hurt.
I went out to check on them.
