Her's And Her's Alone
This is something that has been on my mind for a while so i'm doing it. Please review with absolute honesty as i do not filter Reviews because I generally want your feedback on my stories. So this idea came from what I know of Twilight Vampire's Mates (I Don't know much I only know what my sister told me when i beta read a story for her. As I told her VAMPIRES DON'T SPARKLE AND DON'T GET ME STARTED ON THAT MARY-SUE OF A MAIN CHARACTER UGGH...Ehhem sorry i lost my cool for a second there.) From what I know They are very Possessive of their chosen mates and i remember reading a fic awhile back where Fleur ( and other veelas/Partial veelas) were possessive of their mates. So I got to thinking what if Fleur's Veela Magic leads her to her soul mate? What if said magic connected her from Birth to her Destined One's ( Rosario + Vampire Kurumu anyone?) soul and let her feel his/her (I don't discriminate) emotions and thoughts? What if her soul mate is immune to her allure? Then my fucked up mind thought: What if her mate from birth is a depressed and self hating Boy-who-lived who was abused from the time he could walk and talk? Then after watching Mirai NIkki (Future Diary): What if she turned into an obsessive yandere because of said bond? That leaves us with a Possessive Overprotective Yandere Veela who's basically emphathic to her chosen object of obsession looking for her mate who's an angsty wizard who suddenly has someone who loves him unconditionally. I don't know about you but that is something i'd read.
"Almost Lost"
~STORY START~
Veela's are a species who's love lives are based on predetermined mates. Yes, they do have an allure, but it is mostly for protection from more violent magical creatures. Their allure can stop almost anything in it's tracks and cause it to be enamored with them, if they put enough power into their allure that is. Almost anything because their mates are immune to their allure.
When they are born Veela's Magic bonds them to their mate or destined one's soul, even if the mate hasn't been born yet. The bond allows the Veela to feel her mate's emotions and hear their thoughts if they concentrate. Once a Veela is of age she uses her bond to find her mate wherever they are in the world. It's all common knowledge and while it sounds romantic the bond is completely one-sided and only the Veela is completely attached until her mate kisses her, emphasis on the mate having to be the one to fully connect the bond. Also, sometimes the mate never loves the Veela back causing them to become either suicidal or completely obsessed with receiving her mates love. If the mate dies then the Veela is left a completely empty shell or a completely insane maniac.
Fleur Delacour was no accept to this. When she was born she bonded to her mate's soul immediately ,but not to his magic until she was 3 years old meaning he wasn't born until then. Unfortunate, when she was 4 during Halloween while she was reaching out with her bond curiously, as her mother just taught her to do so recently,she felt fear and heard bone chilling evil laughter then she felt it, something that still haunts her to this day. Unimaginable agony from her 1 year old mate and then nothing... she knew something was wrong.
She screamed out for her mother as she sank to her knees. Said women came rushing in to find Fleur bawling her eyes out on the floor. Her mother asked what was wrong after she brought Fleur into an embrace.
" MY MATE! I CAN"T FEEL MY MATE!" Fleur managed to scream out in french before going back to being in hysterics. Her Mother gasped as she finally grasped the severity of the situation. Her daughter's mate had died. That was the only way she wouldn't be able to anything from the sat there stunned unable to say anything before her daughter suddenly gasped as her tears stopped.
"HE'S BACK! Mother I can feel him again!" Fleur screamed before breaking down into tears. these ones of joy. Her mother soon joined her, but was puzzled as to what had happened. She decided that it could wait for the morning as her daughter was emotionally spent and passed out. She tucked her daughter in before falling asleep on the rocking chair in Fleur's room.
- TIME-SKIP-
After that night Fleur began checking in on her Mate regularly. She was worried as her mate was usually uncomfortable and sometimes hungry for most of the day. Then one night,3 years later, as she was checking in when she felt that her Mate was in pain and heard him wonder why he shouldn't ask about the magician at 'Dudley's' party , she grew furious at the fact someone hurt her mate, she almost lost him once she wouldn't ever again. It only got worse from there as her mate was hurt almost every day after that with it only getting more and more painful. He also started thinking heartbreaking and incorrect thoughts.
'No one cares about me' She did!
'I should just die. No one would care." She would!
'I'm just a waste of space' No he wasn't!
' Why am I such a freak' He wasn't that either!
She swore as she got on the carriage that would take her to Beauxbatons Academy of Magic that she would find her mate and save him from his 'caretakers'. Yes, she thought her eyes glazing over, she'll find him, show him how much she cares for him, and destroy all in her way.
After all, he was her's and her's alone.
-STORY STOP-
So what do you guys think? I hope i did alright. Also, I have noticed that some words were missing from Chapter 2 of DLwTCRBWL after I uploaded it. I don't know what happened there. Please review your thoughts mean a lot to me.
~Oni-Kai Out~
