Hey guys and girls, this is my first story and I will want any kind of review. Some of the chapters are going to be short, and some grammar mistakes, but whatever that's how I write. And mostly they will be written around 2-5 am because I have insomnia, and sometimes I don't even know what I did or what I wrote. I may have some OC or OOC, I don't understand them very well, and: ANY IDEAD FOR THE TITLE WILL BE VALUABLE.
Disclaimer: I solemnly swear that I don't own a thing, but if I could I will just ask CP for Murtagh.
The story will be set after the siege of Feinster; it's not how I think the fourth book will be, maybe an AU.
Chapter #1
It was getting dark and Feinster had just been taken by the Varden, Murtagh had just killed Oromis and Glaer at the siege of Gil'ead. Galbatorix had just used his unfaithful rider to do the treacherous deed, killing a rider and its dragon, now it seems like if time and fate were against them. But Eragon didn't care if fate was being grouchy with him, again; he had already lost his uncle, his farm, his home, Carvahall. But, what had hurt the most was to discover that his mother Selena was dead and an assassin; although the most hurting thing was the knowledge that Brom was his father. Both relief and angst, they had traveled together across Alagaesia, and died at the claws of the Ra'zacs.
Half saved by this mysterious young man named Murtagh, they traveled together to the Varden, Murtagh unwilling knowing that he was going to get kill or locked up by them. Know he was just a traitor, and his half-brother. Eragon didn't knew what to feel, he was just so confused how everything was just developing.
"Hail, Shadeslayer!" Scream a soldier as he passed by. He continue walking until he felt a slender arm around his shoulders, "Hi Eragon," said Katrina; his sister-in-law. "Hi Katrina. How are you"? He asked her, continuing walking with his head down. "Well… the baby and I are ok, but you?" she asked with a lot of concern in her voice.
"I don't know, it's that all this war… just too much for me. Sometimes I wish I had never found Shapira's egg." He said, and it was true, although he loved her very much, she had caused so many problems. "Will you be able to forgive me for what I did? I put you in danger, you almost get kill! If I had left it where I found it we would all be at Carvahall right now." Eragon told her. He felt so bad, it was like if all Carvahall loathed him.
Suddenly Katrina stopped and put herself in front of him, he noticed she was wearing a light green dress tide at her slender waist, and her copper hair was pulled back by a ponytail. While in the other hand he was still in his chainmail. She softly lifted his chin with one hand so that he was looking at her. "It's not your fault, Eragon. I mean, it's fate, what can we do against it? Sooner or later you were to find the egg and become a rider. You are Alagaesia only hope of defeating the Empire, without you being a rider all Carvahall might just be dead. You are a hero Eragon, not villain." She was a kindhearted person, and then she gave him a very warm and comfortable hug. He looked at her and murmured a thank-you.
"Come, Eragon Shadeslayer Bromson, lets seek for Roran and have dinner together as family." Saphira made a roaring sound, "And of course you Saphira! Come lets go to seek him." She said and grabbed his hand.
You see little one? There are people who care for you, like your family.
I know, thank you Saphira, is that sometimes I just wished that nothing of this had happened. Yet I'm grateful to have you.
As long as we are together no enemy will dare raise a hand against us, neither Murtagh nor Thorn. They shall fear us! And they should know that we will have revenge for Oromis and Glaer!
Aye Saphira!
They found Roran talking with Carn. "Oh, hi Eragon," he said and gave him a *manly hug* And kissed Katrina. "Will you come to dinner with us, Carn?" she asked the magician. He looked at her and smile "I am sorry, but I can't Lady Arya Dröttningu said that she and the other elves will teach us new tricks, maybe in another time. Goodnight." He said and left
The three made their way to the lunch room, talking and gossiping for Guntera's know how long.
"Well is far too late and who knows what will happen tomorrow. Goodnight Eragon," said Katrina and kissed him on the cheek. "Goodnight Katrina, Goodnight Roran," Eragon said to them.
"'Night, brother," said Roran and have him another *manly hug*.
He watched as they left for their tents, arms wrapped around each other waist. Eragon just wished for some human-female company. He slowly found his way to his tent and laid on his *bed*
Goodnight Saphira
Goodnight, Eragon. Rest you need it I have a very good feeling about tomorrow. With that she closed their link and went o sleep.
Eragon didn't continue to stare at his tent *roof* and wonder how everything would've been if he hadn't found Shapira's egg; or how it would have been if Murtagh didn't exist or if he had grown in Carvahall and Eragon had lived at Uru'Baen. Tired of so much brooding, closed his eyes and dream of the reconstruction of Carvahall, and living in peace with Saphira, Roran, Katrina and their son/daughter to be born.
Well i want to know how i did; so please Read&Review/or R&R
