Hello, this is my first story. I would like complete and honest reviews, criticism or praise.


I'm down a one way street

With a one night stand

With a one track mind

Out in no man's land

The punishment sometimes

Don't seem to fit the crime

Yeah there's a hole in my soul

But one thing I've learned

For every love letter written

There's another one burned

So you tell me how it's gonna be this time

Is it over?

Is it over?

'Cause I'm blowin' out the flame

Alvin couldn't believe it. Brittany was the love of his life; he thought they were going somewhere. Then she goes with his brother? His baby brother, Simon, he wasn't angry with him or Brittany. He honestly had no emotion or words.

Take a walk outside your mind

Tell me how it feels to be

The one who turns

The knife inside of me

Take a look and you will find

There's nothing there, girl

Yeah I swear, I'm telling you, girl yeah 'cause

There's a hole in my soul

That's been killing me forever

It's a place where a garden never grows

There's a hole in my soul

Yeah, I should have known better

'Cause your love's like a thorn without a rose

Yeah, yeah

He just wished for once she would stop thinking about what she desired and gave a thought about him. She left a permanent void in him, it can never be filled by any man-made or beyond man material. It felt like she stabbed him in the back and she didn't even care.

I'm as dry as a seven year drought

I got dust for tears

Yeah I'm all tapped out

Sometimes I feel broken and can't get fixed

I know there have been all kinds of shoes

Underneath your bed

Now I sleep with my boots on

But you're still in my head

And something tells me this time

I'm down to my last licks

'Cause if it's over

Then it's over

And it's driving me insane

Alvin has cried all the tears he could. He didn't think he could go on, he couldn't take it anymore.

Yeah, is it over?

Yeah, it's over

And I'm blowing out the flame

Enough is enough; he had to get over her. If you want the honest truth, he still loved her. Even after everything she's done, he loved her with all his heart. He hoped she knew that deep down.

Oh, oh...

(Good night Taj...good night Chelsie!)