CHAPTER ONE REWRITE.
Chapter 1: Rishi Outpost
The Shinies at Rishi Outpost would be chilling in the command center, when a Separatist War Fleet comes out of hyperspace. They'd Block all Transmissions.
"Turn on the Red Alert" Said The Clone Captain.
Separatist dropships would land one by one, dropping off squads and squads of droids. The Droids would march on the outpost, breaking down the door.
Meanwhile at the Kamino Defense Fleet
"Sir Rishi Outpost stopped transmitting."
"Send a small fleet to investigate."
"Yes,Sir."
Back at Rishi Outpost
"Sir, Droids are marching in!"
Blaster Shots filled the room, as the clones dropped dead.
A venator would exit hyperspace, seeing the Separatist War Fleet.
The captain send out a transmission. "Admiral Rishi Outpost is gone a Separatist Fleet-"
The Transmission is cut out, being blocked.
The Separatists would open fire on the lone venator, it'd go up in flames, and then explode.
I made this short, the next chapter will be released tonight or tomorrow.