Okay, I have now edited my first 4 chaps to look like the rest of the story, to make them easier to read :)

Sara came home after school early to notice her mother, Laura, watching television with a man who had dark short curly hair who looked to be around mid 30s. She thought this was a bit strange as she had not seen this man before.

Sara just shrugged her shoulders and shouted a hello to Laura to announce her presence then headed upstairs to finish some homework. The man heard someone shout hello and asked Laura who it was, she replied "Oh that was my daughter Sara; you will get to meet her later at dinner."

2 hours later….

As Laura was finishing up dinner she called Sara down. Sara came downstairs and watched her mother and this man set the table. When everyone was seated Laura said,

"Sara, this is Gil Grissom my new boyfriend, I met him through a friend at work, he is a Professor at one of the universities close by." Sara who now had a proper look at Gil saw his gorgeous blue eyes and instantly felt something, although she knew she shouldn't as this was her moms' new boyfriend.

"That sounds interesting, what do you teach Gil?" Gil looked up and met Sara's eyes and was for the moment rendered speechless at how beautiful this young girl was.

"Err I teach Entomology, you know talking about insect timelines and how they can be the most important bit of evidence in an investigation." Sara thought this was great, because she was thinking about going into forensics and Gil would be able to explain more to her about it.

" Mom, do you mind if I ask Gil some questions some time because I think it would help me with my future in forensics to see if I really want to become a CSI, well that's if Gil doesn't mind."

Laura answered, "No I don't mind if Gil here doesn't mind answering some." "No not at all." Gil said. So as they finished dinner Sara went back upstairs to her room to talk to her friends on the internet and Gil and Laura went back to the living room and started to watch a DVD.

(Sara's bedroom)

As Sara lay back on her bed she thought Oh my, moms new boyfriend is really handsome I don't know why I feel so attracted to him, I mean isn't he too old for me to feel this way, I mean I am 19 but I don't know I just looked in his eyes and something inside me just moved but sadly nothing can happen because he is my moms' first nice boyfriend since dad left, I have to try and stop these feelings, but it is so hard to get him out of my head. So to try and get these thoughts out of her head she put on some music quietly and started to talk to her friends on msn.

(In the Living Room)

After the film was finished Gil said that he had to go home because he had to be up early in the morning to go over his notes for his next class, so he kissed Laura goodbye and then drove home, which was only about 10 minutes away.

As Gil was driving home he was thinking about Laura's daughter Sara. I no I shouldn't feel this way as I am dating her mother, who is a great woman, but when I looked into Sara's eyes for the first time, my mind went blank and all I could think about was how beautiful she is. Although why would such a young beautiful girl want someone like me who is 36. It doesn't matter if she did anyway I couldn't come between a mother and daughter like that, I have to try and stop these thoughts but it will be so hard the next time I see her.

As Gil pulled into his drive he stopped the car and took the keys out of the ignition and puffed out a big breath. He then got out and locked his car and let himself into his house, because he had to get up early the next morning he decided to just go to bed.

He woke up lying next to Laura and looked at the clock on the bedside table, seeing as it was only 4:15 in the morning he tried to go back to sleep but failed, so he decided to go down to the kitchen to get a glass of water.

As he walked into the kitchen he noticed Sara standing there making herself a cup of tea wearing a tight tank top and hot pants. He couldn't stop staring at this beauty in front of him even though his mind was telling him that it was wrong.

He moved forward and accidently caught the chair with his leg making a little noise which caused Sara to turn around and blush once she noticed who it was and what she was wearing.

"I couldn't go back to sleep so I just thought I'd come down and get a glass of water." Gil said.

Unsure of where the glasses were he asked Sara which cupboard they were in and she leaned up and got him one, making her tank top rise just a little. Once again Gil found himself staring and had to stop before she noticed, but he couldn't stop gazing at her long legs.

Sara turned round just as he snapped his head up. She handed him the cup and whilst he was filling it up with water he felt Sara's gaze on him but he didn't turn around.

Suddenly Sara pressed herself against his back so he turned round and looked from her eyes to her lips to her eyes and could see she wanted to kiss him just as much as he wanted to kiss her. So he inched closer to her face and could feel her breath on his lips and as he ducked his head to finally taste her lips….