My first story sucked, but hey I'm young and that was my first story. I had an anonymous review saying it was incest or something, but I totally agree (Btw, brother and sister relationships are allowed in some places, just not in the U.S.). This is a preview to my next story which I hope is better. Please review! I need only a few before I release the story. I will accept flamers.
Flashback
I was in my algebra class taking my SOL test. I was halfway through my test when a giant dog burst through the classroom door. A hellhound, I thought. Everyone but me evacuated through the windows. What am I thinking? I can't just stay here; I'm not a demigod. I stared into the demon's eyes with caution. Its expression easily read, you will regret staying here. Without a second thought I charged at it.
It swiped at my stomach, but I had enough time to drop to ground still advancing. Using my own leg, I tripped it giving me additional time. While it was trying to regain its balance I punched it square on the jaw. Before it counter attack, I kicked its side making it fall onto its side. It growled at me angrily.
Suddenly, I bronze colored knife appeared at my side. I took the random knife and stabbed its jaw and the hellhound finally disappeared leaving a pile of golden dust. I looked at my knife which also had dust on it. I put away my knife and I sprinted out the door. This can't be happening, I thought. I can't believe I'm a demigod.