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As Ichigo's math professor continued to drone on and on, he had a feeling he was being watched, and not the "wow, that guy's hot" or the "who is that guy?" or any of that. No, he had a feeling it was a stalker, but he didn't know where his stalker could possibly be. Anyway, he was brought back to reality when the teacher called his name to answer a question, which he solved quickly and, to everyone's shock, correctly.
Later on, Ichigo has just gotten out of school, and was walking home alone. The feeling he got in math was still there, and was bugging him to no end. However, he pushed that thought away. Ichigo needed to get stronger after suffering his defeat to Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez, and he knew the only way was to go to the Visoreds. As he walked to where they were, he received a massive chop to the head, knocking him out cold before he could do anything. He was then dragged off by his assailant, an unknown fate awaiting the Substitute Soul Reaper.
Ichigo awoke hours later, chained to a bed. When he looked up, he saw the chains were made of light.
'Kido!' he mentally said. "Damn it, Rukia, let me out of these chains now! This isn't funny!" He looked down, and saw that he was naked too. "And why the heck did you strip me down?!"
The door opened, but before Ichigo could shout out another comment, his breath hitched in his throat. Before him wasn't the short, flat-chested Soul Reaper who lived in his closet. It was the tall, flat-chested Captain of Squad Two and the Commander of the Stelth Force, Soi Fon. She was dressed in a two-piece bikini with black and yellow stripes, and looked at him with her usual scowl.
"First off, Rukia Kuchiki isn't here," she said. "Secondly, I will not release you from those bindings. Thirdly, I stripped you down so I could see how Lady Yoruichi could possibly see in men. You better be good, or else I'll use my Suzumebachi on you."
Ichigo decided to go along with this, not really wanting to deal with her ZanpakutÅ. Also, Soi Fon looked very sexy in the swimsuit she was wearing. She might not have the biggest breasts, but her ass was quite firm. His cock was already rock-hard, and a good 14 inches. Soi Fon didn't expect him to be that big. Then again, he was the first man she has ever seen naked, so she had no point of reference.
She walked toward Ichigo, and gripped his cock hard, making him groan.
"Looks like you like this."
She kept it up, and after three minutes, pre-cum started coming out of the tip. She gave it a tentative lick, and made a disgusted look.
'Ugh, that's bitter!' she thought. 'How could Lady Yoruichi like this? Maybe it's an acquired taste.'
She licked the sides, the head, and sucked on his cock. He came a few minutes later, filling her mouth with seed.
"Who said you could cum inside my mouth?"
"Hey, I've never done this before, so I couldn't hold back!"
"What's going on in here?" a new voice said, making the two Soul Reapers get lumps in their throats.
"Oh damn," they said in unison.
hope you liked this first chapter
