hello everyone here is a new version of the story i redesigned my characters and everything if you want to see the new design of my characters check my account Moonlight-Haven at on furaffinity under the folder General Furry Art im working on part two with will introduce Ritsuko in her new design please enjoy and dont forget to review ^^
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It was a nice Friday evening around mid afternoon with a nice, cool breeze blowing in the air in a city which is located to the south of the world of Voratopia. The sun was setting which gave the skies a nice orange pink and purple color. Most of those who live in the city were finishing up and heading home to relax to the weekend with their friends or families.
Heading home was a 35 year old black and white tomcat heading home and His name is Robert. Robert works during his weekdays as a construction worker and relaxes during the weekends with his wife and kids. He has jet black fur, green eyes, and short wavy dark hair. He wears wearing a green shirt with a red plaid open jacket blue jeans and brown working boots.
Robert just wanted to get home and relax after a hard's of work. "Finally it's the weekend, now I can spend time with my kids," He thought chuckling to himself as he makes his way to his car however once he was at car about to get in and head home his ears twitch as he heard a call for help, Robertlooked around.
"Was that a cry for help?" He thought scanning the area wondering where the call for help came from. Robert's ears twitched again looking towards the alley. "It must have come from come from the alley that means someone's needs help!"He thought then looks around seeing no one else around to help. "Seems I'm on my own". The male tomcat says getting an aluminum bat out of his car and hurries off towards the sound of the cry for help hoping he can rescue them in time.
Meanwhile in the alleyway of a shopping district not far from the tomcat's location was a tall slender black and white feline, she wore a busty red button shirt and showed half her chest red tight pants dark grey boots she had long dark silky hair and two silver earrings in each ear. She stands on her knees trying to finish to finish off a raccoon that she was having a hard time as the fought for their life. She successfully devoured a ferret girl that was hanging with the girl but the raccoon kept squirming as well as holding onto metal bars of a window was in her reach as she tried to call for help,
"Help me! Somebody help!" the young Raccoon shouts into the air hoping someone will hear her as she struggling to keep the top half of her body outside from being pulled further in, as for the ferret she was being squeezed by the walls of the Feline's stomach which it was making it hard for her to move as it was cramped, the cyan blue walls were soaked with thick purple slime, she was sitting in a small pool of acid, the young ferret was 19 in high school and was hanging out with her BBF until they were dragged into the alley were attacked by this feline who was unbelievably strong taking out her first and devouring her faster than in 5 secs and now she prays hoping someone will hear her friend's scream and come and help them as she felt her clothes being dissolved.
At the end of the alley stood Robert as he stopped dead in his tracks horrified at the scene unfolding before him; a young raccoon was fighting for her life against a black and white feline like himself, who had the rodent in their jaws, the Feline's stomach was expanded to the size of almost a beach ball, the feline was too occupied to notice the tomcat. Robert took the opportunity running up swinging the bat making contact with the feline's head then punches her in gut in which the young Raccoon was coughed up. Sanako growled coughing then looks towards who dared attack her. Robert helped the raccoon up to her feet looking to see Sanako's stomach was still swollen "was there someone else?" he thought. Sanako got to her feet wiping drool off her face before charging at the two and punches Robert in the jaw returning the favor while using her tail to wrap around the raccoon who was trying to escape "No let me go I don't wanna die!"She cries struggling to get free. "Thought that was enough to stop me you two? Well you thought wrong."
Sanako says looking down at Robert who held his jaw while on the ground in too much pain to speak as he was held down by the feline's foot on his chest. Sanako smirked then turns to the raccoon as she pulled them close and flashes a predatory grin while she held the girl's face against her stomach. "You're not such a good friend trying to run away and leave her are you?" Sanako says licking her lips bringing their head to meet her eyes. "So why don't I reunite you with her? Then you two will be together" She says which the Raccoon struggled even more and the cat's tail coiled tighter around her. Sanako grabbed her victim's shoulders quickly using her strength shoving the raccoon's head all the way into her mouth savoring the taste as she swallowed and kept pushing the screaming rodent in as she was shoveled their mid size chest in. Trisha kicked her legs as she felt the feline's strong throat muscles pull her further in. Sanako purred as she took another gulp feeling the huge bulge as she took another gulp.
While Sanako was gulping the rest of her meal her stomach began to groan. Sanako felt her meal's head enter her stomach as she got past their huge thighs. Trisha gasps seeing her friend after she entered the stomach, Felicia who was the ferret had burnt marks all over her and the acid rose up to her waist and half way up her legs .Sanako tilted her head swallowing the feet as she felt the girl's plump hip go down. Robert could do anything as Sanako had her foot on his chest and all he could do was watch in horror. Muffled screams were heard from within the feline's stomach as it groaned. Sanako pants in relief as she slurped the rest of the Raccoon's tail and pats her swollen stomach proudly.
Robert growled and got from under the Feline and pinned her to the wall "Cough up them up, they done nothing to you to deserve that fate." he says looking to her. Sanako had an amused look on her face as her huge girth swayed. "I'm sorry but I don't take orders from other especially people like you."She says pushing him off chuckling. "So what were you trying do here? Act like a hero and save the girls? Don't make me laugh." She chuckles looking towards him, she crossed her arms now slowly grumbling stomach as muffled cries and screams could be heard from within as it was starting to churn and groan preparing for digestion. Both girls within couldn't be heard over the loud growling Sanako's stomach made. Robert clutching his fists he looks at the feline then at her stomach seeing the girls sadly struggle for their lives.
"What gave you the idea to devour those two innocent girls!?" The tomcat shouts glaring at Sanako with mix of anger and disgust on his face while amused look was shown on Sanako's face, chuckling. "My my trying to act all tough but what's this I hear?"She grins walking towards him with ease as if her huge stomach was light as air. She chuckles standing aside him then cocks her head in his view. "Nothing I was just hungry and they happen to be within range that's all" she says with sweet venom in her voice as all he could do was stare in her cold icy blue eyes. A sly grin was shown on her face as she looks away chuckling. Robert was full of anger and punches the feline in the face. Sanako growled and punched him back and soon it broke into a fight. A hard kick was sent to her stomach to where she was slammed against the wall. "Ugh...URK!"She had the sudden urge to hurl and hacked up the top half of the ferret girl who was horrified looking around then looks to Robert while she was still half way in Sanako's throat and she was covered in Sanako's purple saliva and patches of her fur looked burnt."Help me please!"She said trying to reach her only free arm out quickly until her mouth was covered by Sanako's cyan tongue while Sanako who regained her focus realizing her meal was trying to escape and knocks away Robert, she places her hand on the Ferret's head and starts pushing her head back in re swallowing her meal that she abruptly hacked up. "N-NOPLEASE LET ME GO!"The ferret pleaded but it was all muffled due to her mouth being covered by Sanako's cyan tongue, Sanako tilted her head swallowing the poor ferret back down. Wasting no more time Sanako walked over and picked Robert off the ground "Ugh...You thought that trick would have worked?" Sanako stood back up wiping away the saliva from her mouth then glares to Robert with fury in her eyes. "Now you've done it!"She snarls attacking him.
Robert blocked every one of her punches until he had his back to the wall. "Heh I was gonna let you live but after that you're joining the girls in my stomach." She snickers pinning him against the wall. A surprise punch was delivered to the side of Sanako's jaw and Robert was able to escape to his car. Sanako growled rubbing her jaw seeing him run and goes after him. "GET BACK HERE YOU BASTARD!"she says racing after him out of the alley and towards the parking lot, her stomach sway from the extra weight as her victims were being sloshed around inside.
Robert made it to his truck and jumped it shutting the door starting his car, but he was having a hard time starting it as Sanako as just entered the parking lot. "When I get my hands on you, I'm going to kill you!" Sanako snarled running towards him. "Come on! Come on! Start!" Robert says then gasps happily when he heard the engine and drove away before Sanako had the chance to jump onto the car.
Watching the truck drive off Sanako growled. "I will hunt you down tomcat, and when I do you're gonna wish you'd never interfered with me."She told herself says then turns and walks back into the alley. "And don't think hiding will help because I will find you no matter where you go." She walks back and sitting on a couple crates in the shade to rest to leaving her to her thoughts as she sat her head in arms as her elbow was pressed into her stomach which was by now very active as it bounced and swayed as the struggling increased as well the grumbling noises got louder. Sanako looks at her stomach feeling her meals helplessly struggle but their cries couldn't be heard with the noises her stomach made "Urrp.."Sanako pats her beloved stomach before think of a plan. Getting up Sanako walks out into the shadows and with that she soon was gone
To be concluded in part 2…..
well i changed some things around but it should be better now so be R&R part two will come soon
