This is my first Gilmore Girls fanfic. So please review and tell me what you think once you finish reading.
Title: First Bad Habit
Summary: What if Lorelai wouldn't have just given birth to Rory when she was sixteen, but instead she gave birth to twins? Follow the lives of both Rory and her older twin sister, Rachell. Would things turn out to be different than they were in the show?
Rating: T
Couples: Starts off with Rory and Tristan & Rachell and Dean, but will end with Rory and Dean & Rachell and Jess. Other pairings may be established later on in the story.
Chapter 1:
"Mom have you seen my red dress by any chance?" Rachell asked from the top of the stairs.
"Oh I borrowed it the other night check my closet," Lorelai answered from the living room.
"What does she have a hot date tonight? Or something?" Rory asked walking out of her bedroom and into the living room.
"I'm assuming she's going out with Dean," Lorelai answered not looking up from the magazine that she was reading. "Aren't you doing anything with Tristan. I mean come on it's a Friday night," Lorelai said finally closing the magazine and looking at Rory.
"He hasn't called me like he said he would yet," Rory answered sitting down next to her mother.
"Uh-oh!" Lorelai said looking away.
"Uh-oh what?" Rory asked with a questioning look.
"The kiss of death," Lorelai answered.
"Mom!" Rory scoffed while crossing her arms.
"What? I'm just saying that in most cases like that it always means that the end is near," Lorelai said in a defending tone.
"Aww! Don't feel down Rory. There are always more fish in the sea," Rachell smiled walking down the stairs.
"Oh be quiet Rachell. You're not really helping here," Rory said with a bit of sadness in her tone of voice.
"Sorry," Rachell apologized not that she sounded like she meant it at all.
"Wow Rach you look hot tonight!" Lorelai smiled eyeing her oldest daughter.
"I know I do look hot don't I?" Rachell asked smiling at herself as she twirled around in a circle.
"So where's Dean taking you?" Lorelai asked curiously.
"I don't know he just said to dress up and be ready by 7:30 sharp," Rachell answered looking at the clock.
"Which means he should be here any minute now," Lorelai said.
"Oh shit it's him!" Rachell exclaimed as the door bell rang.
"Hey! Watch your language Rachell!" Lorelai scolded while standing up and walking over to Rachell.
"Sorry," Rachell apologized."How's my hair?" Rachell asked while grabbing her purse off of the table.
"It looks great," Lorelai answered smiling.
"Oh don't forget to leave a strand of hair hanging Rachell," Rory said walking up next to Lorelai.
"Thanks sis," Rachell smiled while pulling on her jacket. "Alright well I'm off then," Rachell said as she turned and walked to the door and opened it.
"Have fun and be home no later than 12:00!" Lorelai called after her as the front door shut. "Well it looks like it's just you and me tonight, kid," Lorelai said turning her head towards Rory.
"I'll pick out the movies," Rory said turning and walking over to the movie cabinet.
"And I'll go get the popcorn," Lorelai smiled as she entered the kitchen.
So there's chapter 1! Probably not the best, but it was more of a prologue than it was a chapter though. So what did you think should I continue? I also accept critism so feel free to use it.