Hey, this is my first Bakugan story. Tell me what you think
Runo and Alice was working at the cafe when Julie came in there crying
"What's wrong Julie?" Runo asked.
"Billy broke up with me" Julie said. She started crying again.
"I'm so sorry for you" Alice said as she rubbed her back. Dan and friends came inside and saw Julie crying.
"Hey, what's wrong?" Dan asked
"Bilbilbil broooke up with meeeeee" Julie cried. Then she looked and saw three people who she never met
"Dan, who are they?" Alice asked.
"Oh, guys these are Mira, Ace and Baron. They are from Vestal in New Vestroia." Dan said. Julie look really hard at Ace
"What are you staring at?" Ace asked Julie. Julie looked away
"Nothing" she answered. It becamse silent for a while. Marucho broke the silence.
"So...Are you going to stay at my house for a while since it's bigger?" Marucho asked Mira
"Yeah" Mira answered. Everybody cheered.
"Well, I'm going to ask my dad if we can have the rest of the day off so we can hang out today" Runo said as she went to her dad. She came back a couple of minutes later
"He said yeah so we can go Alice" Runo said as the gang left to go to Marucho's house. There Ace, Mira and Baron was amazed how big the house was.
"Well, you can roam the house if you want to" Marucho said as he walked off.
"Want to go to the workout room?" Drago and Percival asked their brawlers. They just shrugged and walked to the gym, the girls went to the water fountain and Shun and Baron just sat outside. Julie snuck away from the girls quietly and went to follow Dan and Ace. They were lifting weights while their bakugan was shouting out numbers. Julie watched and duck her head when she thought she was being watched. When Ace sat up straight and turn around, she snuck away. Dan stopped too.
"Why you stop?" Dan asked.
"I felt like something or someone was watching us not that long ago" Ace said. "Like that girl with the gray hair"
"Julie?" Dan said.
"Yeah, I think she's watching me or something" Ace said
"Maybe she likes you" Dan said as Ace jumped a little bit
"Well, sure she's alright, but I don't like her like that." Ace said
"I know you like Mira like that. Baron told me" Dan said as Ace blushed
"Don't tell anybody that or else" Ace said
"Or else what?" Dan questioned
"I'll tell Runo that you flirted with Mira while you were in Vestoria" Ace said as Dan started begging
"Pleae don't tell her" Dan begged as Ace laughed
"You keep my secret to yourself and I'll do the same with yours" Ace said as they shooked on it.
Where the girls are at...
"You what?!" Runo yelled. "Do you know that's consider stalking"
"It wasn't like that. I was just watching them work out and I was inpress. Especially with Ace" Julie said. Mira had a looked on her face. Runo caught it but didn't say anything
"You like Ace?" Runo asked
"No...well maybe I don't know" Julie answered. Runo was still figuring this out
"So you ugh" Runo said before Mira talked over her
"She said she doesn't like him" Mira said as Runo finally understand like Mira like Ace
"How about we talk about something else" Alice suggested. 'Thank you Alice for joining this conversation' Runo thought.
"Hey guys, it's time for dinner" Marucho said. The boys were eating like pigs while the girls ate like they had manners. After dinner, they decided to some shut eye except for Shun. He decided to read a book. Alice joined him. Everybody else went into their room to go to sleep. Julie knocked on Ace's door and he answered.
"Hey, I don't think we properly met, my name is Julie" Julie said as she held her hand out.
"Ace" he said as he shook her hand and let go of it. She was staring at him and he started backing away
"Well, bye" he said as he shut the door. Julie walked away thinking to herself
'Ace is really nice, and kinda cute' Julie thought as she walked into her rooom
Well that's my first Bakugan story, tell me what you think, do you think I should continue?