Rayman:The Grand
Crown Adventure
This story is
dedicated to Rayfan, who's review sparked the story. Thanks
Rayfan! Anyway, on with the story!
Our story begins in
the forest, where, near a big oak tree, is where Rayman is sleeping.
He had a busy day, First, Globox had him baby-sit his children (Lots
of yelling, fighting, and pulling hair on Rayman.), Second, he had to
deliver a new dictionary to Murfy (It was about 50 pounds.), And
third, he had to water Ly's flowers AND watch her house while she
went to a store to buy seeds.Rayman was too tired to
anything, evening eating his favorite food, noodles. So, just 20
inches north of Ly's house, he took a nap. Just a short nap, but it
became a long nap just in 2 minutes.
Rayman started to have a weird dream. He was flying around without the helicopter working. ("Where
am I?") thought Rayman. Then, he fell a LONG way down. When he
touched solid surface, a thick cloud of purple haze started to form a
face. When the face finally made shape, Rayman was surprised. ("Ly?")
he thought. Then he remembered. Rayman and Ly. Couple. Lovers. He and
her. They had been together for about 3 months. Their first kiss at
the river. But, why here, in a dream? But before Rayman could do
anything, he was awake, by a violently shake. When his eyes opened,
he saw Globox, who looked frantic.
"(Yawn) What is it Globox? Did one of your children run away? "Rayman
said. "No! It's about Ly! She may be in big trouble! You need to
be at the Fairy Council now!" Globox said with some trouble. He and
Rayman ran though the forest to the Fairy Council as fast as their
legs could carry them. As soon they got there, they were led to the
Heart of the World chamber. The King of the Teensies was their eating
cheesecake from Mozart's Cakes Co. "(Chew, Chew, Chew.) Good!
Order some more later! (Smack) Yum! Yum… Oh, Rayman! What are you
doing here?" said the king chewing on a piece of cake. "Can I
have some?" said Globox with his tongue hanging out."No."
replied the king. "Globox is telling me that Ly is in trouble."
Said Rayman. When the king heard that, he stopped eating and dropped
the piece. Before it could hit the floor, Globox grabbed it, tore off
the a small part that was chewed by the king, and ate it. "Follow
me." The king finally said. They led into the council chamber,
where they tried to solve problems.
Rayman had been here before, just a few days after he had defeated Reflux and turned Andre into a Red
Lum. He was led to the center of the area. There was Otto, the doctor
who had helped Rayman and Globox before. The Head of the Council was
a limbless creature, like Rayman, named Matbelles. He was about 5
years older than Rayman, but didn't have the power or the courage
to go on any adventure. But he was wise, and he NEVER forgets
anything. People sometimes called him the "Elephant Man". Rayman
thought, (Hey… only criminals are allowed in the center for
punishment!) Was he a criminal? Did he had to with Ly's problem?
"Council is now in session!" said Matbelles, with a cough. He
once said he was 36 years old, but he looked like 54. "Rayman,
The one they call Big Nose, now that your girlfriend, Ly the fairy,
is maybe in grave danger, we would like you to go to the Kingdom
Trandus, where she is right now." Said the Council leader. "Why
there? That place is filled with soldiers that kill any body that
comes there! Ly is probably dead by now!" said Rayman. Then,
Matbelles spoke up, "Ah, She is not. Do you know Prince Klaus?"
Rayman thought about it. Klaus was the prince of Trandus, but really
the king. Why, you ask? Well, his father, King Sylvin, was a great
king. No one had no pieces of gold. He had a wife, but she died of a
disease. Now, this little story is now Klaus took over. When The
Great Darkness War started, he was a leader in the army. He won many
battles, he lost very few. But, at the Battle of Lightness Canyon, he
dissappered. Just like that. No one knows what happen. Some people
think he knocked out and executed at the enemy's base. Some say he
was buried, alive. Anyway, that battle won the war. Klaus didn't
cry about his father. In fact, he smiled. He hated his father. His
father was treating like a little boy. His mother died when was 9
years old. Still, his father treated like he was two. He sick of it.
He was crowned king two days later. He changed ALL of his father
laws. Taxes were higher. Supplies were more expensive. Peasants were
killed, imprisoned, and tortured if they didn't pay their bills or
tried to object the laws. No one was richer than Klaus. Also Klaus
was a Moneybags. He also knew Moneybags from the Dragon Realm. He was
like Mr.Krabs. Expect he liked spending money. He spent it on
paintings, beds, fountains, and other things, with his picture or
name on it. When he saw the magical, beautiful fairy Ly, he started
to try to marry her. Now, his subjects were mad when they heard that.
He was going to use Ly to get more money. Sure, there is a few spells
to get money, gold, jewels, silver, bronze, etc. Anyway, people were
joyful to hear that Rayman and Ly were in love and Ly had termite the
engagement to Klaus. Now Klaus was angry when he heard this, just
being 32 years old. "Yes." Rayman said finally. "Well (Oh
brother), Klaus came to town and found Ly, and kidnapped her and took
her to his castle and is right now forcing her to marry her."
Yoinks!
Ly is in trouble! Can Rayman save her? Can he also end Klaus reign of
terror? Will Globox manage to stop eating so much food? Will Rayfan
write a good review? Tune in into Chapter 2! See later! - Syl
