I would really appreciate it if you would take the time to review. This is for an English assignment, so if you have any suggestions, criticism – tell me. Even if you hate it and think it should burn, please tell me how I can improve it. Thanks.

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Little hobbit, the stars are in your eyes,

But where are the shadows that trail your path?

Where is the darkness pursuing the Little Folk?

Where are the black figures draped in cloaks?

You flee to the fields to escape their cries,

But you cannot hide from the Dark Lord's wrath.

Ring-bearer – you hold the ring of power,

The Lidless Eye is seeking it from his black tower.

You faced the terrors of the haunting shadows,

And in their screams were the voices of death.

You fell to the ice from the piercing pain,

Your freezing wound is now your bane.

But before you slept, and in the darkness froze,

You called the star-queen with a fading breath.

Ring-bearer – hold to your strength, do not falter,

Do not fade to the coldness of the winter.

Little hobbit, your purpose has been revealed;

You hold in your hand the doom of Middle-earth.

Look in your heart and find the will to carry on,

Do not face the dusk, but hope for the dawn,

For you hear its call, and you do not yield.

Resist its voice - destroy its force to save your mirth.

Ring-bearer – you hold the ring of power.

What will you do in the final hour?

Ring-bearer – hold to your strength, do not falter,

This is your fate, it cannot be altered.