I originally wrote this story in first person. If you have any suggestions I'd gladly take them.
Blood trickled down her leg. She dogged another attack. Suddenly all went silent. Firestar, the leader of ThunderClan, yowled painfully as he lost his third life. "Silvermoon watch out!" the battle roared with action. Silvermoon whipped around as Leopardstar leaped toward me. Agony swept though me like fire in my vanes. She missed her second attack. Silvermoon's fur stood on end. To battle Leopardstar would take every ounce of skill and strength she had left. Leopardstar taunted Silvermoon. Many times she almost ended the battle, but using Silvermoon's favorite move she failed. Maybe this time she could defeat Leopardstar, Silvermoon thought slowly. I, Silvermoon, have the power of StarClan on my side. Fire rose around her. Silvermoon closed her eyes to the others yowl and scream for safety and help. As she opened them Silvermoon was shocked to see silver-white flame lap before her and all around her as it closed in. At first fear made Silvermoon want to run. But where would she run to? "Do not be afraid young Leader" said a voice. Her ear swiveled backwards in surprise. I'm not a leader though, Silvermoon thought. "Who are you?" she called, "Why do say I'm a young leader? I'm barely a warrior!" A figure appeared before Silvermoon. The cat's blue-gray fur looked white next to the flames. The cat spoke, "I am Bluestar the former Leader of ThunderClan." Silvermoon's blue eyes widened. Bluestar continued, "You're the chosen cat to become the Leader of StarClan." Silvermoon looked at Bluestar like she was crazy. "I'm not even dead though! How can I be the leader of a Clan who is pasted away warriors when I haven't even gone to join those warriors!"
Okay I'm sorry to leave you hanging but that's all I can type for tonight.
