First of all this is my first story, so don't expect the best of it. I might get a couple things wrong like Jutsus, grammar, or even the cannon stuff. If you just leave a review with no criticism such as pure praise or pure bashing I will delete it.
"Thoughts"
Dialogue"
"Deep or loud dialogue"
"Justu".
--Oh, Hello There--
-Valley Of The End-
"RASENGAN!" Yelled Naruto.
"CHIDORI!" Yelled Sasuke.
As the dust cleared Sasuke was leaned over Naruto, as he began to stand up his haitate fell near Naruto. "Goodbye Naruto," Sasuke mumbled to Naruto though he could not hear it.
Sasuke began to walk away as rays of light shone through the heavy rainfall. A cloaked figure appears when Sasuke is gone. This figure wore a orange spiral mask. The figure looked around with narrowed eyes, "How could these mere gennin cause so much damage?" The man had watched the battle and saw potential in the Kyuubi container.
He looked at Naruto as he thought, "With proper training he could become a useful tool for me in the future, but how do I convince him to join me?"
"Surely Konaha will search for him." He grabbed a kunai out of his cloak and sliced Naruto's finger for blood. The masked man then poured the blood to create a trail that leads to the stream, he then ripped a hand sized piece of Naruto's jacket and threw it next to the stream. "This will do," thought the man.
The man then picked up Naruto and put him on his right shoulder, he then jumped away.
Five minutes later Kakashi jumped into the clearing, "Am I too late?" he thought as he looked over the clearing. He saw a trail of blood and a orange cloth leading to the river. "Naruto!" he thought panicked. He motioned Pakkun, his summon to sniff the cloth. He thought with dread what his summon was about to say. "That reeks of Naruto," the summon said sadly.
A lone tear escaped the copy nin's eye, "I have failed Obito by letting Sasuke stray into darkness, and now I have failed Minato by letting Naruto get killed." said the joninn. He gritted his teeth in anger at Sasuke 'killing' Naruto. "We should head back to Konaha to deliver the news." said the sharingan holder as he stood up.
--Oh, Hello There--
-A Hidden Cavern-
Naruto slowly I opened his eyes and thought, "Shit, am I dead?!" Naruto tried to stand but he felt a hand holding him down, he then heard a Voice say amused, "Oh, hello there,"
