Hi this is my first story so please I need constructive criticism. Thank you

DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT OWN JUSTIN BIEBER OR ANYONE RELATED TO HIM

Hey I'm Sammy Garcia. Yes originally it's Samantha. Personally, I like to be called Sam or Sammy. I'm your average 16 year old. I'm 5"6 and I love music. Music is my passion and music is my life. Legends, in my point of view, are Prince, Michael Jackson and of course the great Steven Tyler. They were all passionate about music and loved what they did. I post videos on YouTube. You know like Christina Grimmie and Megan & Liz. It's usually me singing or just blabbing on about my life. I gotta say it's not the most exciting life but hey it's not boring either. Today, I was going to my friend's house. Her name is Elli. She's one of my best friends. We were both brunettes and she was a little shorter than me. Her was cousin, that's not really her cousin, was coming over with his family for dinner. They lived close by and I guess I kind of knew them. I knew Jazmyn and Jaxon. They were the most adorable babies ever. And then there was Justin. Him, I didn't know that well but I heard he was pretty cute. Cute wasn't the word Elli used. Can't use it here. It was more than hot. So I think you get the think. Today I was meeting the famous Justin. You know not really famous and I'm babbling again. Ok well really quick. A brief description of what I was wearing. I was wearing white shorts, a blue "Peace, Love, Dream, Hope" tee and a grey longish cardigan with thin teal and light blue stripes. I paired it with black sandals. My hair was straight but i had a braid on to the side. Elli was wearing torn jean shorts and a black layered tank. She paired it with black wedges and her hair was down and straight. It was like 10 am so it was pretty early. I had slept over the night before so we both ironed our hair for today. You could say we're all one big family. Well anyway, we were just watching tv, rating some guys when we heard a knock on the door.

Elli:And now you meet the hottie.

Sam:Oh joy

Elli:I told you he's not like other guys

Sam:I'll believe it when I see it

Elli:You will

She opened the door and in came Justin with his family. I, naturally stood up. I hugged Pattie and carried Jazzy. Jaxon was asleep so we didn't wake him up. I hugged Jeremy, their dad, and Elli introduced me to Justin. Weird how I've never met him before.

Justin:Hey I'm Justin

Sam:I'm Sam. Well Samantha but Sam works too.

Then Elli nudged me. Yeah I babble when I'm nervous.

Elli's mom:Why don't you kids go to the mall while I start cooking lunch?

Elli:Yeah cmon.

Sam:We'll be back by 12?

Elli's mom:Sounds like a good time

Pattie:You guys have fun

Justin:We will

Sam + Elli:Can I drive?

Justin:Yes

Sam:Who?

Justin:You

Sam:Yay

Elli:Justin likes Sammy. Sammy likes Justin.

Sam:Eh. Keys please

Justin:Oh yeah.

He gave me the keys. I swear that boy was the first guy that could work those shades and stripes. So you can understand, he was wearing a white v-neck with black thin stripes with dark wash skinnys and black Supras.

Sam:Thank you.

I got in the drivers seat and let everyone get in. Justin sat next to me and Elli sat in the back.

Justin:You know where the mall is right.

Sam:Of course I do. I spend most of my time there. And we're here. I love living close to the mall.

Elli:Me too. Hotties with bodies everywhere

Sam:Yeah that's good too. Cmon

We got off the car and I gave him back the keys.

Justin:Thank you. So where to first?

Sam:Hollister

Elli:It smells good in there but I think we might need gas masks

Sam:Na they've lowered the smell a little bit.

Justin:They have? I haven't noticed.

Elli:Yeah cuz your flirting most of the time

Justin:Well I'm sorry if I'm a guy

Of course he wasn't like other guys.

Sam:Cmon let's go

Justin:Let's

He put his arm around my waist and his other arm around Elli's shoulder. We walked to the store and started looking through clothes. I chose a denim mini skirt and a neon green v-neck and a small black halter vest.

Sam:Think this would work?

Justin:Try it on.

Sam:I bet you'd like that wouldn't you

Justin:Well you know me

Sam:Sort of

I went to the changing room and tried it on. I came out and showed him

Justin:Turn around. Like 360

Sam:Ok ok

I turned around in a circle and came to a spot finding him really close to me.

Hope you liked it. Thank you. Please Read and review :)