This is my first fanfiction for Harry Potter so it's probably not very good but please review, positive or negative just please review! Anyway enjoy!
"James! It's 10:48! You're gonna miss the train unless you come soon!" It was Dad. He always gets frantic when we're late for the Hogwarts Express because he knows very well that it leaves at exactly 11:00 and no later. "Coming Dad" I shouted. It was my first year at Hogwarts. Dad's always telling me stories about when he was a kid at Hogwarts. He and his friends used to always be sneaking out after lights out. I shucked my wand and my last book into my trunk and snapped it close. I grabbed Pettles my owl and dragged my trunk down the stairs where Dad put them in the car. "Next stop Kings Cross Station!" Dad shouted.
I stood in front of platform 9 and 10. I had my trolley with my trunk and Pettles in her cage. "You sure it'll let us through, it looks pretty solid to me" I said "It's fine" Dad assured me "Together" Dad and I ran straight at the barrier an just as I thought we were gonna hit the wall we went thought It onto platform 9 ¾. The Hogwarts Express stood glimmering in front of me. "James!" It was Lupin, Sirius and Peter "Where have you been the Hogwarts Express is about to leave!" "Sorry a bit of a delay with Pettles you know" "Well come on, we've got a compartment at the end" "Bye Dad" I said "see you soon" Just then guards whistle blew. Sirius grabbed my trunk and I grabbed Pettles and we ran off to find our compartment.
Well that's, chapter 1! sorry it's so short I didn't have much time but please review and Chapter 2 should be coming soon.
