my first story that i wrote myself, i'm wondering what people thinki really want to know what people think so i know if i should continue this or not i would like to but not sure if i should i was indra, then i was madara , now i'm naruto
guide (i've begun working as a reporter) Memories "so what are you up to now?" Speech 'i just told him' Thinking
prologue
who am i? these thoughts, are they mine? these memories, are they mine? (My children i'm sorry but my time has come asura you are my successor make me proud my son and indra work with your younger brother and bring peace) brother we don't have to do this please we can just join our clans and end this feud please reconsider we could truly bring peace brother) (im sorry it had to end like this me walking away the victor and you dieing as the loser i just hope you will be granted entry to the heavens to be with father and mother) (your time has not yet come ningen you shall soon awaken with no rexollection of who you once was) 'am i Indra?' (Big Brother, will you play with me? mother is busy, and father refuses saying that if i have time to waste then i should be using that time to train and become stronger) (big brother, why? why did father have to die? first mother and now father, why?) (Big brother i did it i paid those senju bastards back if only Hashirama and Tobirama didn't show up i would've slaughtere them like the pigs they are) )big brother, i'm sorry i promised i wouldn' leave ou alone but i guess thats a promise i can't keep i'm sorry brother i'll miss you as my last request take my eyes lead our clan to greatness just as you were meant to, good bye and live long big brother) (don't you see this didn't have to happen we didn't have to fight but it's too late now good bye madara) (once again we have met and once again you are being sent back to the living as a new person a new riencarnation this time you will slowly gain back your memories an your abilities will not be barred from you) 'am i Madara?' (kushina look at our beutiful children you were amazing this is the most amazing moment of my life) (Not right now Naruto, me and your mother are taking sarah to ichiraku ramen for her birthday) (NO! Naruto, i won't train you, sarah needs the training so that she can learn to control the kyuubi's chakra) (everyone we thank you for coming to sarah's birhtday part but we have an announcment we now name sarah the heiress to the senju, uzumaki, namikaze, and the uchiha) (team six will be a solo genin for his power Naruto senju uzuamki namikaze uchiha, Team seven will be sasuke uxhiha, sakura haruno, and sarah senju uzumaki namikaze uchiha) (i'd like to congratulate all of you on your excellent jobs of comleting the second task but i'm afraid we will be holding preliminaries) 'I was indra, then I was madara, now i'm naruto'
i would like to see what other people think of this and would like other people to take a shot at this if you try this please pm me/
