Earning a Hero's Title
Hey a new story. Please read. Please. The author pleads on hands and knees. In addition, Review this is my first story I will take all the help I can get just do not go too far. I tried and that is all that matters, right? Right?
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO, if I did I'd make him…different A GOD! What, who said that?
"…"- Speech
'…'- Thought
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Kyubbi talk; Inner Sakura
Flashback / dream
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Chapter 1: Mistake
We find ourselves in a valley, cliff walls on both sides, gorgeous waterfall, falling majestically into the small lake below, foam rising from the contact of the each body of water.
Two giant men face each other glistening in the setting sun in between them the waterfall shines. The two men finger some sort of sign as in an ancient battle of long ago.
At their feet, two boys stare at each other like the ancients above them.
The boy on the right down on all fours holding him up as if something heavy was on his back. A dark red, clearly seen, yet invisible aura surrounds him, moving around as if it were that of dancing flames, a tail of the same substance extends out his backside. Claws extend out his hands; blond hair spiking upwards as if too much gel was added but it dried any way. He turns his head upwards to look at his opponent blood red eyes staring with enough malice to scare off even his most hated enemies, a slit splitting them down the middle like a cats or a fox. Whisker marks splitting his cheeks in threes. His hair sways as if wind is blowing.
The other boy stares at his enemy with blood red eyes as well with two comma like marks within them, standing upright in a blue shirt and white shorts, a black aura surrounds him and his gray skin instead of the pale white of his normal skin color. The things making the boy appear more fearsome than normal are the god-forbidden hands protruding from his backside appearing to be webbed together by a thin filament of skin.
Staring at the blond he extends his left arm holding it in place with his right, the black aura surrounding the boy starts to develop around his hand the aura crackles like that of black electricity and a noise starts to be heard, a thousand birds chirping coming from the very hand of electricity.
The other boy starts to gather his aura bubbling together in his right hand; a ferocious wind can be heard as he gathers his aura, spinning it into a ball of power with the wind as an aide in its creation. Then over the deafening roar of both attacks a flapping sound is heard as the boy in blue starts flapping his wings causing him to rising off the ground slowly, finding a decent height he rushes forward with the force to obliterate a steel wall.
The other boy seeing this sheds a tear having to resort to this and jumps forward with the force of a modern day jet aircraft.
They impact, attacks first.
Time slows.
They see each other, as they once were, as little kids the blond and now pale skinned boy standing on air looking at the other, sadness coating their faces. Then the blond boy's expression changes to one of pure malice and hate, suddenly the scene changes with a rush of red chakra.
The two boys as they are fighting now, the blond boy's aura grows, his tail lengthens, his claws grow, and his fierce attack grows double its size.
It slowly envelopes the other boy's left arm completely going threw his attack as if it didn't exist slowly taking his entire left side with the attack only one word is heard as the birds die, "How?" As the boy says the final word, he is launched downward to the depths of the lake nearby.
The blond lands on the water holding himself up with the same power that killed his opponent, and looks down into the now murky water to see the glimpse of his fallen enemy, "Sasuke," the name escapes his lips with so much sadness as tears streak down his face.
With pain and fatigue, he cries out the name one final time.
"SASUKE!!"
Suddenly the boy lets go of the power keeping his grip on the water, he hopes beyond hope that he doesn't survive, that he never sees the light of day again, allowing him to slowly sink, just before he blacks out from pain and sadness he feels one more thing a hand.
'Deaths hand? 'Yes deaths hand'
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Heh. Bout time kit, you were worrying me there, thought I had died.
Hearing the low voice of the Kyubbi, Naruto opens his eyes and stands up to be reacquainted with the large familiar cage that holds the gigantic, blood red, furred demon. 'Kyubbi what is it, why did you bring me here?'
Why do you blame me all the time? It's not like I want you here.
'Because, I only come here when I'm near death or when you call or I need your help.'
So you don't remember.
'What don't I remember'
You'll find out later. Oh and there are a few surprises waiting for you on the outside. HA!HA!HA!
'Wait, what?'
Just then, Naruto feels the rush of wind that so often means that he is waking up and the low laughter of the Kyubbi fade. He is met with the familiar feeling of extreme tiredness.
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Finally getting annoyed at the intolerable beeping close him, Naruto stirs only to find that he cannot move, the weight of something, no someone is holding him down. He stirs again, hoping to awaken the person on top of him. Nope, no such luck. He sighs and moves again, this time managing to free his arm from the almost intolerable weight. After freeing his arm he moves it to inspect the weight on top of him finding out that someone is sleeping on him, He decides to just rest his arm on top of the person's back being careful not to wake them up. Being slightly confused about why he is at what he presumes is the hospital he thinks hard trying to remember the last thing he saw.
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His lungs burning and his entire body feeling like he has just been burned alive, he also feels himself moving at high speeds, something piercing into his stomach. Naruto opens his eyes to find out where he is or in this case, where he is going. He sees the familiar color of the green shoes of a shinobi on a branch then without a pause, a branch shoots out from under them into the distance. He closing his eyes he smiles knowing he is safe and falls promptly to sleep.
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Sighing again Naruto decides he should keep his eyes closed, and in a few more moments, he falls to sleep.
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The author here I would like to apologize in advanced for any copied material from other writers but that is what I get for existing after you. Oh well. Also please review. Also there is going to be a lemon LATER so if you don't like that you can skip them.But that won't happen for a long time, or short, my choice.
