This is my first story, so please good reviews, heck even bad ones are much appreciated
This is my first story, so please good reviews, heck even bad ones are much appreciated. Unfortunately I don't have a beta yet, so my grammar may b extremely bad.
Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight. If I did you can bet that I wouldn't have stopped at breaking dawn, and I would have done the entire series again in Edward's point of view the second time around.
Enjoy!
Broken
Here I lie on this floor
Crying because of you
You left me and kicked me aside
Said you didn't love me
And now here I am
Broken and without you
I often think that I should hate you, but I can never bring myself to do so
Everything reminds me of you
Music, the forest, the sun, and every breath I take
I break apart at the seams
Yet you no longer care
My life's just a routine now
I wake up, get ready, go to school, and come home
I only live so that I don't scare my father
Yet when night comes, I cry myself to sleep, and wake up screaming
My dreams are now nightmares that are part of my reality
At night, I often dream that your still here, but you keep getting farther and farther away
And when I fall your not there to catch me
Since you left I don't feel anymore,
And now I'm just waiting for my life to end
I'll pray for you to come back and catch me before I hit the ground
But now I wonder if you ever cared at all
Ok so that was my first story. And please, flames, and tips on how to make it better are much appreciated. So now review!
