This is my first story, so please good reviews, heck even bad ones are much appreciated

This is my first story, so please good reviews, heck even bad ones are much appreciated. Unfortunately I don't have a beta yet, so my grammar may b extremely bad.

Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight. If I did you can bet that I wouldn't have stopped at breaking dawn, and I would have done the entire series again in Edward's point of view the second time around.

Enjoy!

Broken

Here I lie on this floor

Crying because of you

You left me and kicked me aside

Said you didn't love me

And now here I am

Broken and without you

I often think that I should hate you, but I can never bring myself to do so

Everything reminds me of you

Music, the forest, the sun, and every breath I take

I break apart at the seams

Yet you no longer care

My life's just a routine now

I wake up, get ready, go to school, and come home

I only live so that I don't scare my father

Yet when night comes, I cry myself to sleep, and wake up screaming

My dreams are now nightmares that are part of my reality

At night, I often dream that your still here, but you keep getting farther and farther away

And when I fall your not there to catch me

Since you left I don't feel anymore,

And now I'm just waiting for my life to end

I'll pray for you to come back and catch me before I hit the ground

But now I wonder if you ever cared at all

Ok so that was my first story. And please, flames, and tips on how to make it better are much appreciated. So now review!