"Hey babe"
Hermoine turned around.
"What?"
"Your really sexy"
Hermoine couldn't believe her eyes. She was watching at Draco Malfoy, who was watching her sorta shyly. They where standing in the train.
"What? Draco Malfoy thinks the mudblood is sexy" He shrugged.
"Well, I like your new hair"
Hermoine smiled a mysterous sort of smile. She went to America last year to visit her cousin, and she was ghothick, and Hermoine like the style. So she painted her hair black and straightened it and started wearing lotsa eyeliner. Last year Dumledor allowd other cloths then the regular uniform, so she was wearing a low-cut black corset with red laces, and a beatiful necklace with rubies. She had a miniskirt, black with a red decoration of a dragon on her butt. under the miniskirt, that showed of her womanly curves she had gotten over the summer, she was wearing red fishnet stockings and black high heels. She discovered books wheren't really her thing, and she starting dating boys, who all liked her. It was like she had magical gift to make all the boys fawn over her. Including Malfoy…
"Hey, wanna go out? Tomorrow? There's a Evonescenzce concert in Hogsmeade" Draco said.
"OMG! I so love them! Amy Lee is great!" Hermone said.
"Yeah! I love the music!" Draco said.
But then Harry Potter walked by. He had changed over the summer to. He found contacts in a muggleshop, so he ditched the glasses and his scar was now covered by his black hair that fell in front of his emerald eyes.
"Hey Raven, are you coming? Eww, why are you talking to the ferret?" He said, glaring at Draco.
Hermoine had changed her name into Raven, because her friends thought that name suited her more. Draco got red.
"See you around, Hermoine" he said, before running away. Raven stared at him.
"Plz don't do that Harry" she said softly. Harry stared into Raven's piercing blue eyes, and smiled.
"Don't worry, that ferret won't bother you, Raven" he said, pulling Raven into a hug.
Raven sighed, and pushed him off.
"Were is Ron?" she asked, noting the hurt look of rejecton in Harry's eyes.
"I don't know. In the compartment?"
They went to find Ron. He was in a compartment with Snape. As soon as they came in, he got out.
"Remember, Weasly, if you don't get better grades I have to owl your mother" he said threathingly, glaring at Harry and Raven.
They got in,
"What did the bat want with you, Ron?" Harry asked.
"Don't call him that! Your so childish Harry!" Ron said, growing red.
"What the fuck, Ron?" Harry said. "Dontcha hate him?"
"I do, but your just childish." Ron said.
Raven sat down and looked out of the window… Things just sucked. Draco Malfoy was a total hottie, but why did he talk to her? And harry why did he hug her? She got really confused, and started crying silently. The boys didn't hear her. They were busy fighting. If only they would understand her… Raven cried more. Her tears leaked on her skirt, and she silently got up. She was gifted, she could become invisible when she wanted. So she got invisible and walked to the door, nobody noticed her. She went to an empty compartment. She sat down on the floor and cried harder. She didn't hear the door opening, and suddenly two hands were on her shoulder. Draco Malfoy was there.
"Omg, haven't you heared of knocking?" she sneered. Draco looked hurt, but quickly smiled at her.
"What happened? Who made you cry?" He asked.
Raven sighed.
"Sometimes the wolrd just doesn't see… see me. Like I want to….to" She tried.
"Become invisible?" Draco said softly
"Yes! You now the feeling?"
"Oh yeah….You know, I never talk about it, but my father rapes me. And beats me. I wish I just could become invisible. Then he wouldn't see me" Draco said.
His grey eyes got all teary. Raven looked at him.
"Yes… I understand."
"Omg! It's been such a long time ago since someone did!" Draco hugged her.
Raven cried again. They talked to each other some more.
"Sometimes, when I feel no one loves me…I…." Draco tried, looking nervous.
"Yes?" Raven leaned in.
"I…I…" Draco looked down,
"You can tell me, you now" Raven whispered.
"I…I sometimes cut myself. In my wrists. It just feel so relieving" he said, sobbing.
Raven wiped away a tear.
"It doesn't matter, Draco. I want to do it to sometimes…But I'm just to scared" she said.
They both cried. Then they heared footsteps, and quickly stood up.
"You can't tell! Not to anybody!" Draco whispered.
Raven nodded. "I won't!'
They got out. And both went to there own compartment.
So! What do u ppl think? Is it good? Should I continu it? This is my first story, so be nice, haha lolz Please review!!!!
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VampirEyes
