Here is the rewrite of the first chapter do not ask for you to be put in the story I do not take characters but I do take ideas on what to do next. So review and read this pre thing

Foxtails

Chapter 1: Amu's life

One sunny day in late fall you if you looked hard enough you could see a mother walking with her 6 year old daughter through the forest.

"Mommy where are we going?" the little girl asked her pink hair pulled into two ponytails. She was wearing a green dress and had long stockings on.

"You know your father loves you right Amu?" Her mother said handing her little girl a big picnic basket.

"Of course mommy, mommy why are you leaving? Where are you going mommy? Mommy comes back!" the girl screamed falling to her knees. Her golden eyes filling with tears.

Now let's go ten years into the future.

"Come on Amu It's time to get up before Maxi eats all the rabbit." Jinni said pushing Amu with her nose.

Amu just groaned and flipped over trying to get more sleep.

"Come on Amu! Ashley won't let us eat until you get here and I'm starving!" Paul said running over and stepping on Amu.

"I'm up! I'm up! Get Samuel and Jenny then we'll eat." Amu said pushing herself up and standing on two feet.

This was her new family she was the girl abandoned by her family. Now she lives with the foxes. They are her family and she never wants to go back.

The only hard part was food and clothing. In the basket there was some food and a dress but she out grew it.

The foxes had strolled some clothes for her and that's what she wore.

The food was the easy part. Just eat rabbit and plants and other things. Normal things that grow in the forest.

Then before I could reach the end of the cave I saw a person.

He seemed tall and had a weird cat thing on his shoulder. The weirdest part was the thing was talking.

"Are you sure the person was back here Yoru?" The person asked the cat thing.

"Yep just a little further back nya." The thing said and Amu reutilized that he meant her.

Amu started running further back in the cave then she had run into a rock and the world faded to black.