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This is my first fanfic and it is being posted on my site.

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The Night

Part 1

It was a cold night..............TIME TO PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joey:*opens the door*Hey Yug!

Yugi:Hi Joey!I brought the microphone just like you said.

Joey:Everyone else is here.

**On the left couch Tea and Mai were drinking coke and chatting about clothes.On the Middle couch Bakura and Yami Bakura  were  tossing the Mulliemum Ring in the air playing horseshoe with a coke bottle.On the table Rex Raptor and Wevill were playing football and Tristen was munching on the popcorn..Yami Yugi and Kaiba were seeing who could sing the loudest.**

Kaiba:LALALALALA!

Yami Yugi:LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

Yugi and Joey:SHUT UP!

Joey:Ok everyone.I've put a list of stuff to do in the hat and we will draw and we will do that..

**Ding Dong!!**

Joey:Hi Serinity!!!

Serinity:Hi!!**Goes to sit with Mai and Tea.

Joey:I'll draw first.Lets see."Have a popcorn fight"

Tristen:I ate all of it.Oops!

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Look forward for tea singing and watermelons!