Disclaimer: The characters of Inuyasha belong to Rumiko Takahashi.
A/N: Ok everybody, this is the first fic that I've put up on Inuyasha (category). Please review and tell me what you think ok? No flames! Wasting your time doing that tells me you have nothing better to do with your time. Also, read the last note at the end, it won't kill ya! Keh!
His Eye's
His eyes are an intense Golden color
I can't look away- he knows this
His gaze tells me everything
I'm trapped
His eyes amber pools darken, he knows this
He knows he has his prey
I can see it
Gods, the passion in his gaze courses through my body
My heart beats faster as my blood thickens
This man is dangerous
I know this, but it can't be helped
He calls me with a look
I watch as he closes in on me, the space between us gone
His hand comes to my waist, pulling me closer
Never did we remove our gaze from the other
This is my end
I'll never be the same
His gaze is sin in and of itself
There is no better way to end
Ok everyone I have a Challenge:
Make this better! Turn it into a story with whoever you choose, but remember his eyes are golden and I made no mention on which the other character is so I'm looking for stories of all types. The rules are to use a few lines from this story into your own- no less than 3 or 4.
Good luck everyone and I can't wait to read what you've come up with. And don't forget to email me tell me your name and title. This way I will be able to read it, hoping to see a bit of comedy also.
I want to say thank you to Splendentgoddess for taking part in this with her story called His Eyes Are Golden at Mediaminer. InuGrrrl for writing In His Eyes her story is at FFnet. This is Twisted Hilarity and the story is Playing with Youkai is on AdultFFnet. These are some of my favorite Authors that rose to the challenge and I might have two more for you guys.
