A/N hey guys! long time no see, I've decided I want to get back to writing, so here I am! I'm gonna redo this story and make the chapters longer and just try to make it better in general, so fans of this story, rejoice! its back! now without further ado, STORY!
We all know how humans can be, horrible and heartless, no regard for human life, but we also know how great they can be, kind, compassionate and willing to protect what they love to the end, and in the city of rapture, as strange as it seems, the only signs of this in the depths of this fallen city are the big daddy's. Fathers and protectors to little sisters, they are the knights in shining armor of this dying city to these little girls. So lets take one of these knights of rapture, and give him another little girl to take care of, a little girl who is picked on constantly for her abilities, a little girl who always try's her hardest no matter what is thrown her way, a little girl who's parents couldn't care less what happens to her because shes a failure. A lonely little girl named Louise.
He wandered the halls of rapture sadly, longing for his little sister. when subject delta came through and escaped rapture, he took almost all the little sisters with him, including his. His thoughts went to his little sister 'Katie...her face...her smile...her laugh...how she would always find a way to cheer me up...how she would always do that cute little pout when she was annoyed', he couldn't take it, he fell to his knees and groaned up at the ceiling in pain at his loss 'why!? why her?!...she was all I had left, of before I came to this place, of before I became what I am, she was what held me together, every time I was knocked down, she was the reason I got up again, every day I contemplated whether I should just let the splicers end me, she was the reason I pushed on'. he just sat there and groaned in pain for what felt like hours, until something made me stop, and contemplate if he had finally gone made, "my servant that exists somewhere in this vast universe" he got up and started looking around frantically 'that was the voice of a little girl, a little sister!' he heard the voice again as a large, green oval appeared in front of him, startling him "my divine, powerful, wise, beautiful servant, heed my call" he could hear the voice coming from the oval, he could hear a undertone of desperation in her voice, making him want to find her and comfort her all the more "I wish from the bottom of my heart and add to my guidance...and please, appear!" he couldn't take it anymore and charged through towards the voice, heading through the oval and suddenly feeling the sensation of falling.
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There was a large explosion that knocked her back,she looked around frantically for what she summoned, and didn't find anything, and with all her classmates laughing and making fun of her, She almost broke down 'I failed, they're going to kick me out, how could I fail? I studied day and night for th-' she was pulled from her thoughts when a loud roar was heard from high above her, she looked up and was shocked to find what looked like a strange golem falling from the sky, she couldn't make out the details very well but its eyes were glowing a vibrant red. It started shifting in the air until its feet were facing the ground, it started roaring with what sounded like laughter right before it hit the ground, creating a large crater. For a few moments, everything was silent as everyone stared at the crater, the silence was broken when a large hand grabbed the side of the crater and started pulling itself out, professor Colbert pulled out his staff and pointed it at the hand as the golems head came into view.
'its eyes...they're beautiful...they shine like hell fire' she was so mesmerized by its eyes she failed to notice when it fully pulled itself out of the crater and started frantically looking around at the students before its shining eyes settled on her and it started moving towards her.
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He was surprised to find out that he was falling, from rather high up at that, towards...was that grass? he hadn't seen grass in years, he also noticed a bunch of people standing around where he was going to land, he grinned underneath his helmet and let out a loud roar, catching their attention if the looks of surprise were anything to go by. He activated his telekinesis plasmid and moved himself so that his feet were facing the ground,he was grinning like a madman, he hadn't felt like this in years! he started laughing with joy as he hit the ground, his weight breaking the earth beneath him, creating a large crater with him at the center. calming down from the rush and looking around the crater he made, he noticed an edge of the crater that looked sturdy enough to hold him.
He crouched down and jumped towards the edge and just managed to grab it, he heard a couple of gasps above him, he grinned as he pulled himself the rest of the way up, when he got to the top, he remembered what how he got here in the first place 'the little sister!'. He looked around frantically, until he saw her, a little girl with pink her pink eyes, and she was looking at him in awe, he smiled and started walking towards her, but before he could get to her, a bald man got in his way, keeping him from her, keeping him from his charge. He growled and leveled his drill at the man, using his other hand to point to the side, indicating he wanted the man to move. The bald mans glare turned to confusion as he lowered his staff slowly and moved off to the side, watching him closely, he stopped growling and started walking towards her again. The girl finally seemed to snap out of her awe and noticed he was right in front of her and gasped before starting to crawl away from him, before he kneeled and wrapped his arms around her in a hug. She just sat there in shock for awhile, before he picked her up and put her on his back, before turning back to the crowd, who were staring at him.
The bald man was the first to snap out of it, turning to his new charge "well miss valliere, it seems you have summoned a most excellent familiar, now, its time to complete the contract" the man said, he didn't know what the man said about completing the contract, but his charge did as she tried to climb off him. He picked her up and put her on the ground, where she glared up and him when he put her down, and he couldn't help but find it adorable, she looked like she was about to do something before a look of realization and then embarrassment crossed her as she looked up at him "um...could you please kneel?" she asked, red in the face, I laughed again and she glared at me before I kneeled down in front of her. I was shocked when she kissed my helmet but then smiled wider, right before my arm started burning, i grabbed my arm and started growling, the feeling was like when I first injected myself with incinerate before I became a big daddy, my charge took a step back as a mark burned itself into my hand.
When the pain went away I stopped growling and looked at my hand, curious what caused it and was shocked to find a strange mark burned onto the back of my suits hand. I looked at my charge in curiously and she stared back, and we just stared at each other for awhile before the bald guy clapped and made us both jump at the same time "alright class, I believe thats everyone, you are dismissed". all the other people started leaving and my charge looked up at me, and I knew what she wanted before she asked as I picked her up and put her on my back "alright familiar, that way!" she shouted, and I laughed fondly as I started walking towards one of the large stone towers she had pointed to, 'something tells me my life just got a whole lot more interesting'
A/N hey guys! woo! redone chapter one!, I hope you guys all like what I'm doing with the story, and sorry, because I'm redoing the story, the story might not match up from chapter to chapter. anyway, I'll see you guys next redone chapter!
