Hey all, this is my first post. I'm mainly doing this so I can get used to uploading (seriously weird process here). Anyway this is a poem I wrote in about ten minutes, so please don't flame me. Thanks!
Blue Eyes
By Sabriel
Oceans
Flowing in your gaze
So cold
Eyes like sapphires
So bright
With unshed tears?
Please
Don't turn me away
Eyes so lonely
Let me love you
You love me
I can see it
Eyes like ice
Like frozen waters
Treacherous
Forbidding
Let me break the ice
With love
Please
I love you
Hey, it wasn't that bad. I think I figured this upload out after all! Please review, I don't think the poem was that bad. Please give me any advice too,thanks!
See Ya , Sabriel
