Hey all, this is my first post

Hey all, this is my first post. I'm mainly doing this so I can get used to uploading (seriously weird process here). Anyway this is a poem I wrote in about ten minutes, so please don't flame me. Thanks!

Blue Eyes

By Sabriel

Oceans

Flowing in your gaze

So cold

Eyes like sapphires

So bright

With unshed tears?

Please

Don't turn me away

Eyes so lonely

Let me love you

You love me

I can see it

Eyes like ice

Like frozen waters

Treacherous

Forbidding

Let me break the ice

With love

Please

I love you

Hey, it wasn't that bad. I think I figured this upload out after all! Please review, I don't think the poem was that bad. Please give me any advice too,thanks!

See Ya , Sabriel