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Introduction
It's been years since I last saw her. Almost ten years.
Ten years since I last touched her soft skin. Ten years since I last kissed her lips. Ten years of being here just because I gave my own life so she can live hers.
I wonder if she thinks about me. I wonder if she reminds me but I know that it's not possible. Ten years, ten years, ten years. Ten years down here is like 40 years.
My punishment is to know that I'm not her mind. To miss her everyday and not be able to be with her. Although I feel this pain I know I did the right thing. She was the light of my dark life, a life I didn't really appreciated until she came.
When I first saw her, I felt like a wave crashed over me and I felt scared. She was different. She didn't fall like the others. She had her rules and she didn't let anyone near but nothing made me give up on her. I was there when she was angry and I was there when she laughed. I was there when she was sad and I was there when she was happy.
Her cold exterior made me think she did not care for me but as soon as I forced my lips with hers and saw the deep crimson blush crept itself in her cheeks and I knew she cared for me.
I couldn't be one second without her. She was my all, my world.
I proclaimed that I would die for her… and I did. I did because I loved her. I did because I couldn't let her suffer down here.
Every memory in my head had softly faded, except for hers. I can see her white eyes; I can see her quiet smile. I can see her soft, pale skin. I can see her.
"Brother" I heard someone call for me from behind. Its ghostly voice could make any human shiver with fear but I was no longer human.
"What?" I asked.
"Are you ready to leave, brother?" The man said. I turn around to find a man with long light purple hair, his skin covers in purple as well while his eyes were deep red while his giant wing that looks like hands softly moved.
My friend, he as well as I, missed someone from the outside, someone who he gave his life for. He laid his hand on my fur as my tails moved along the fire beside me. "Yes" I answered.
Year after year we had plan this day and it is today that we would finally make it true. My friend nodded firmly and took out a knife from his stash. She slit his wrist and drew a mark on the covered sulfur wall. He said a few words and then a white bright light covered us. Then we were back, both human again.
I looked at my friends and he was young again, like the day he had died. His pale skin was back, his hair was short and black again and his eyes were his onyx one again.
"Were back" He said with a smirked.
"Yes…"I said.
"Come on Naruto, let's go find them"
I know it was real short but it's just something to start on.
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